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Paris Kyne - 2007 Launch - The rest

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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:27 pm

Just a few other pics from the day

Rumplestiltskin
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Witch
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Mother from Jack and the Beanstalk
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Postby Alex on Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:45 pm

Wayne,

No. 2 is excellent - I find lighting, colours and the composition complementing each other and all is looking very natural.

No. 1 is also very good, good DOF and nice feel to the image overall.

The last one I don't find particularly appealong, possibly due to the harsh shadow in the background.

Great work overall.

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Postby outtram on Wed Aug 15, 2007 11:42 pm

number 1 is the most engaging.

can i ask the lighting setup... i'm doing the strobist 102 course at strobist.com :)
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Postby PiroStitch on Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:40 pm

Outram - the setup was a 580EX fired off camera and attached by the Canon off camera cord.
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Postby outtram on Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:16 pm

cool i actual need to take a shot like the first one for my next assignment.

you should submit your entry haha

http://strobist.blogspot.com/2007/08/lighting-102-umbrella-specular-portrait.html

more info here.

http://strobist.blogspot.com/2007/08/using-specular-reflections-as.html
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