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Posted: **Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:52 pm**

A few of my recent ones......

Cheers
Dan

Posted: **Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:28 pm**

Hey Dan,

Haven't commented on your work recently, so here goes.

#1 I really like this one, the processing really appeals to me with only a minor niggle the brighter white bit near the bangles.

#2 I really like the tight crop, I'm not use to seeing such fine detail in the models complexion from you, at first I liked it but on closer inspection its almost too sharp (or over sharpened as the texture of the skin isn't very appealing) I like the pose, crop and lighting.

#3 This one doesn't do much for me, no keen on the pose or the composition its a bit mess with the window or door or whatever it is on the far right side.

#4 Mixed feelings with this one, her legs look a little unnatural again (same model as last time right) they seem overly brown and the wide angle make her left leg took bigger then her right which is a bit distracting. Nice smile and lighting, but it feels a little aimless.. as in why is she on her knees, outside presumably on your deck ? I prefer a garden, beach setting or her doing something more engaging (if that makes sense?)

Posted: **Thu Aug 16, 2007 9:22 pm**

Alpha_7 wrote:Hey Dan,

Haven't commented on your work recently, so here goes.

#1 I really like this one, the processing really appeals to me with only a minor niggle the brighter white bit near the bangles.

Hey yeah i was trying some back lighting, never have i done it before.....

#2 I really like the tight crop, I'm not use to seeing such fine detail in the models complexion from you, at first I liked it but on closer inspection its almost too sharp (or over sharpened as the texture of the skin isn't very appealing) I like the pose, crop and lighting.

This was not sharpened at all......i love my Nikon 1.4 50mm....lol

#3 This one doesn't do much for me, no keen on the pose or the composition its a bit mess with the window or door or whatever it is on the far right side.

Yeah tight space.......not much i could do....

#4 Mixed feelings with this one, her legs look a little unnatural again (same model as last time right) they seem overly brown and the wide angle make her left leg took bigger then her right which is a bit distracting. Nice smile and lighting, but it feels a little aimless.. as in why is she on her knees, outside presumably on your deck ? I prefer a garden, beach setting or her doing something more engaging (if that makes sense?)

No different model, same lens.....10-20mm Tokina....

Thanks for the c & c Craig, i appreciate it very much

Posted: **Thu Aug 16, 2007 9:57 pm**

I love the lighting. Great!

Any info of yor setup?

Keep up the great work!

Posted: **Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:08 pm**

the first 3 are excellent

except the first one the framign is a bit off in my opinion needs more room at the top and i'd probably centre her too but i knwo what you were trying to do with the whitespace and lines on the left

2nd one sweet sharp with lots of detail

3rd one is cool too nice shapes there
where is the rest from that model

Posted: **Fri Aug 17, 2007 3:43 pm**

The third one looks a little too much like she spewed on herself. Other than that, I like the lighting in all shots. If I had to pick my fave it would be shot 2. Really nice focus on the face.

Posted: **Fri Aug 17, 2007 3:51 pm**

wow all the colours are just great. lovin the outdoor background, felt like its a canvas. agree with the pose with #3

Posted: **Sat Aug 18, 2007 5:39 pm**

Nigell wrote:The third one looks a little too much like she spewed on herself

Ohh awesome critique thanks.........really valuable :roll:

NOT!

Posted: **Sun Aug 19, 2007 1:44 am**

Hey Dan, some really nice work and its great to see that your work load seems to be increasing with all the different locations and models you are allowing us to see

All of these (and your work in general) are so sharp... are they all taken with th 17-35?

or is there another secret up your sleve

Cheers

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