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Deep in thought

PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 10:18 pm
by Alex
Was playing around at home with lighting set-up.

Image

Comments and critique are welcome.


Thanks

Alex

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:28 am
by Alpha_7
Has a very glamour feel to it, with the soft blur. The lighting looks good but the darker edges around her arms are a little distracting (was it from blurring the shadow ?)

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:32 am
by Alex
Thanks for the c&c, Craig. That was actually a real shadow which I also didn't find appealing.

Cheers

Alex

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:38 am
by wendellt
nicer shape i still think re framign you shoudl shoot wider and then if you think its appropriate crop in post production that way at least you have a full image

im a fan of tight intimate crops too but in this case i think it looks likemisframing

also the slight blur is a bit strange but this is just a matter of more attention and pateince needed in post production

i applaud your resourcefulness by building a makeshift light modifer very very good

also regardign the neck watch the ripples, just need to change pose a little to avoid these small things
for studio work striving for perfection and watching details is key