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Tassie photos part 1

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:33 pm
by Thommo
Hey all. As part of my course i went to tassie for 2 weeks over easter. We have an exhibition coming up pretty soon so i need to get my stuff ready. Im after some pretty harsh (prob gonna regret this) criticism.

Anyway here goes.

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I am quite interested to see which out of 3 and 4 works better as well as any other suggestions

Also there doesnt have to be a theme running through the photos hence why they seem a bit random together.

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:25 pm
by Glen
James, I like the use of leading lines in 1. 3 & 4 seem to have no focal point for me, so I find them a bit bland, it may be different for others

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:22 pm
by Eugene-K
I like 1,2 & 4, didn't like 5, but probably it's only me :)

PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:57 pm
by Pehpsi
Love 1 & 2, 5 is great - nicely done, and I prefer 4 over 3.

My 2cents :)

Cheers.

James.

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:02 am
by Thommo
Pehpsi wrote:Love 1 & 2, 5 is great - nicely done, and I prefer 4 over 3.

My 2cents :)

Cheers.

James.


cheers,

also there is a photo taken by one of my class mates of us all playing cricket on the beach about 20mins before 2 was taken... i didn't realize just how good the sunset was going to be.

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:11 am
by robert
no 1 is for me out front by far, love the colours and the subtle softening of the water motion. I prefer 4 over 3,

Robert

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 1:39 am
by shakey
I like #2. I've had a play and tried to make the sky more dramatic. Image linked here. Happy to remove immediately if you'd prefer, otherwise I'll dump it in a week

http://downsouthphotos.smugmug.com/phot ... 0789-M.jpg

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 1:41 am
by Thommo
i can see what you have done but i wanted to try and keep some detail in the beach/pier

still i love the sky in it, will have to have a bit more of a play

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:11 am
by iluxa
I like 1 and 5. Really-really nice photos.