had to use some selective colouring/ blur/ darkness in the background to minimise the big ugly bins that i didn't manage to notice at the time. C&C aprpeciated.
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having a sh*tload of fun
i reckon it'd be something like this...
had to use some selective colouring/ blur/ darkness in the background to minimise the big ugly bins that i didn't manage to notice at the time. C&C aprpeciated.
EM1 l 7.5 l 12-40 l 14 l 17 l 25 l 45 l 60 l 75 l AW1 l V3
The second one is the strongest out of this. The composition, exposure and colour tone is spot on.
Not a great fan of the first one with the desaturation of the background. I can see what you were trying to do, but the comparing these two - the second one is best. Great work and keep it up! That's what this should be about, having fun (not just your subject but you as well)! Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
Come follow the rabbit hole...
Like Piro, #2 works for me, but not #1
THe separation form the background, the figure on the RH edge drawing you away, then the eyes returning you to centre all work. An intriguing and intersting composition. Greg
It's easy to be good... when there is nothing else to do
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