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Macro flower portrait

PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:59 pm
by chrisk
alot of hard work went into this shot believe it or not ! took me ages to get the flashes working the way i wanted and the light right. i think this is an orchid, not really sure. edit: tis a magnolia and Geoff's crop.

sigma 150mm f2.8
f4, 1/200s, spot met
sb800 top right (with homemade softbox)
sb600 top centre (diffuser)
black sheet in background.

comments on improvement appreciated.

Image

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 12:06 am
by Geoff
Very nice, my only criticism would be that there's too much dead space at the top of the image..it needs a serious crop :)

Pls remember that according to the FAQ and to adhere to making this place better for all, we request that all images are 800pixels on the widest side.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 12:11 am
by chrisk
ahhh....many apologies. i thought 800px was the widest setting not the max setting. will fix it now. great crop idea...thanx. :)

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 1:05 am
by Biggzie
I agree about too much space above.
I dont think this is an orchid.
My only other comment which isnt much of a problem, but the petal at the back washes out a little detail of the 2 petals inside. Are they white on the inside or is that the light washing out a little colour. again this isnt a real problem though.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 1:09 am
by Biggzie
Ypu obviously recropped this as I was typing, I had to look twice when I posted.
Thats a much better crop.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 1:12 am
by chrisk
yeah, tis whitish inside petals. and i just found out its a magnolia. my flower ID aint too crash hot. lol

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 1:20 am
by Biggzie
My flower ID aint too crash hot either, but I used to grow orchids so I knew it wasnt 1 of those.
How do you find the Sigma 150mm ... Ive been thinking about the Sigma 180mm f4 macro. Last I looked they didnt make the 150mm for my camera.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:39 am
by chrisk
realy liking the 150mm. i love the extra reach i can get and its tack sharp when you want it to be. also very quiet, is IF and build quality is excellent. having come from the tamron 90mm f2.8 though, i must say it's quite heavy in comparison.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 9:01 am
by poompy
nice lighting and crop. love the colours.
i reckon it would like better with a little more DOF.

otherwise i love it.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 12:51 pm
by Biggzie
i love the extra reach i can get
Thats what Im after with better quality than Ive got now.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 1:17 pm
by robert
Looks well worth the effort!! The black background suits for a dramatic shot, I'm wondering if a white background might also make for a nice high key softer shot?? Not as dramatic but if that flower is still alive might be worth a go.
Robert