Is this worth entering?
any ideas on different Processing? is it too dark?
Asylum
this is a color version there is still more space above and to each side for alternate crops
all comments appreciated
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B&W.... should I enter this
I like the color version of this image but I have a B&W competition coming up
Is this worth entering? any ideas on different Processing? is it too dark? Asylum
this is a color version there is still more space above and to each side for alternate crops
all comments appreciated
I'm undecided as to whether I like the mono or the colour the best... at first glance i thought the mono... but I am thinking that if you cropped the ceiling out of the colour it would come close to beating it...
I really do like this image btw.. its very eyecatching..  The last thing I want to do is hurt you... but it's still on the list...
Great work.
It's a tough choice. But I'd have to go with the b&w version. And the crop is much better too.. Also, I think it needs a slight tilt to the right? Cheers. Nikon D70
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I prefer the B&W but would like to see it lightened slightly to bring the guy sitting on the right back into the picture a little more.
Love the shot though. Cheers,
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Keith,
Great image. I prefer the B&W too, and I'm wondering about yet a different crop: remove some of the floor ... dunno, but might be worth playing with. I agree with the comment about trying to bring in a little more depth for the person on the extreme right. And I can't help but think of yet a different crop ... just the person on the left ... with the caption "does my bum look big in this?" g.
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Depends what you are going for
The color: The feature that draws my eye is that wall the tones are just great The mono: The people draw my eye. I think I prefer the tones and feel of the color. You should crop it to remove about 10% on each side.
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