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nyfw portraiture 2

Postby wendellt on Fri Oct 05, 2007 11:10 pm

part 2

up close and personal, shot with the 85mm f1.4 at 1.4 modified fong sphere on flash lit from the side and ambient
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this one is blury but i still think it works
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Postby Alex on Fri Oct 05, 2007 11:54 pm

No. 3 - fantastic expression captured!

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Postby Biggzie on Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:32 am

I opened this thinking Not Y... For Work .... What the hell does the Y stand for?
Didnt think of New York Fasion Week did I :) But I had a brain teaser for a while

#1 & #3 are my picks, leaning towards #3
#2 - if you could get the definition of the left cheek like in #1 would be brilliant. Maybe not with the depth of field, maybe with a little shadow to give the left cheek a little shape. (too picky, its still excellent)
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Postby Pehpsi on Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:07 am

Awesome work once again. 2 & 3 are cracking!
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