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Dandelion Portfolio

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 7:51 am
by BT*ist
I've been spending a bit of time on Redbubble and I've noticed that everyone (slight exaggeration) has a dandelion shot in their portfolio. So on the weekend, I decided to go out there, find some dandelions, and see what I could come up with.

I'd really appreciate some feedback on whether any these treatments work, and also how they could be improved!

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/61147501@N00/1677358629/" title="Photo Sharing"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2356/1677358629_a63ba1cedd.jpg" width="500" height="333" alt="z2IMGP6640" /></a>

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<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/61147501@N00/1678210014/" title="Photo Sharing"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2334/1678210014_c35f0c4e14.jpg" width="500" height="334" alt="zbw2IMGP6638" /></a>

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 8:54 am
by Alex
For me, the last one is probably the best of the lot, followed by the one before that. I like the treatment in the two shots.

Alex

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 9:10 am
by gstark
I like the use of space in the third image, but the rest do nothing much for me.

In the first and the last, I'd like to, for instance, see more of the stem. These two look unbalanced to me because there isn't enough of the stem.

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 9:49 am
by sirhc55
All - superb :up:

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 2:16 pm
by BT*ist
Thanks for the feedback! Gary I'll see what I can do: I have some latitude (particularly in the last one) to make a crop featuring more of the stem - the crop I used was mine, not the camera's. For the first photo it might be a bit more tricky, as that was close to the photo's full size.

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 2:26 pm
by blacknstormy
I really like the last shot - but it needs a fair bit of 'cleaning' - you can really see where you've gone through and erased ?? part of the background, giving the shot a 'dirty background'...... after cleaning it will be :up:

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 2:45 pm
by Manta
Ummm.... not everyone's got a dandelion on Red Bubble! (Remiss of me, I know)

Great set BT but I'm really leaning towards the second as my 'pick'. The subtle colours are just magnificent.

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:37 pm
by colin_12
There is something about #3 that grabs me BT.
Regards Colin

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 11:44 pm
by BT*ist
Thanks for the additional feedback : I've attached a 'new' version of the third photo, which is the attempt at a clean* and uncropped image, thus with the maximum stem size possible.

*thanks so much to blacknstormy for noticing and pointing out the 'cleaning' issue - I had to tilt the screen of my laptop more than 45 degrees backwards to actually see it, but you're absolutely right! :oops: Not sure if I quite have the skill to fully clean it, but I've at least done a concerted 'dusting'!

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/61147501@N00/1689544699/" title="Photo Sharing"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2210/1689544699_2ceec9bd4a.jpg" width="500" height="335" alt="zbw_gsIMGP6720" /></a>

Thanks to all who commented!

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 11:50 pm
by PiroStitch
the repost looks much better now. Would be great in your folio.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:00 pm
by Yi-P
I like #3 and reposted #4... they are great works, makes a very good print in a frame :D