Room with a view - more from Taronga

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Room with a view - more from Taronga

Postby Ladybird on Fri Jan 25, 2008 11:13 pm

I'm sure this has been done to death but I thought it was a great angle.

C&C appreciated. Click for SLIGHTLY larger images (I can't get any bigger on Photobucket :x ).

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Re: Room with a view - more from Taronga

Postby Big V on Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:32 pm

Ladybird - I like the idea of these two shots and had it been a better day weather wise, they would have had a greater impact. The haze and grey skies you do not have any control over obviously as you get what you get when you travel. However, you could make a slight adjustment to the pic in curves or levels to help give it slightly more punch. The horizons in both of the shots keep drawing me to them, I cant work out if they are just slightly crooked or there is a bit of an optical illusion going on - maybe if you had a little play with them to see if by adjusting them slightly it improves the pic. I do like the framing and well done for spotting that opportunity.
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Re: Room with a view - more from Taronga

Postby Ladybird on Sat Jan 26, 2008 7:39 pm

Thanks Big V, I'll have another look at them and see what I can do.
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Re: Room with a view - more from Taronga

Postby Ladybird on Sat Jan 26, 2008 9:38 pm

Is this better??

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Re: Room with a view - more from Taronga

Postby Manta on Sat Jan 26, 2008 11:00 pm

Definitely an improvement with the increased contrast, LB. I'd be tempted though to mask out the curves or levels adjustment so that it only affects the background area. Too much contrast in the foreground foilage spoils the overall balance, IMHO. If you didn't do it on a separate adjustment layer (which adds it own mask for you to use) you can just use the history brush to paint back in a previous history state.
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Re: Room with a view - more from Taronga

Postby Glen on Sun Jan 27, 2008 12:47 pm

Ladybird, really think the second two are a great improvement and great images from a well used spot
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