Correcting Camera perspective distortion

Hi,
know the shots are rs (hand held amongst big crowd- planning on late night attach with tripod etc) but would appreciate C&C on my 1st attempts at correcting Perspective distortion . Shot with Sigma 10-20 on 40D - using Photoshop Elements attempetd to get verticle alingment a bit more realistic but not really sure what I should be trying to achieve ...ie what makes a good shot of close up architecture ? how far is too far ?
Origional

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Northern Lights - North Tce Adelaide PS display extended to end of March for anyone in town
Rgds DebT
know the shots are rs (hand held amongst big crowd- planning on late night attach with tripod etc) but would appreciate C&C on my 1st attempts at correcting Perspective distortion . Shot with Sigma 10-20 on 40D - using Photoshop Elements attempetd to get verticle alingment a bit more realistic but not really sure what I should be trying to achieve ...ie what makes a good shot of close up architecture ? how far is too far ?
Origional

edited

Northern Lights - North Tce Adelaide PS display extended to end of March for anyone in town
Rgds DebT