The Black Tree

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

The Black Tree

Postby stubbsy on Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:30 pm

Double post. Oops - Here's the image...

I'm not sure about this one.


Image
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Re: The Black Tree

Postby sheepie on Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:32 pm

But it looks like the first one isn't working either! I'm getting a 'post doesn't exist' message :?:
*** When getting there is half the fun! ***
User avatar
sheepie
Key Member
 
Posts: 3029
Joined: Sun Aug 08, 2004 11:56 am
Location: Picnic Point, Sydney Australia *** Nikon D200/D70 ***

Re: The Black Tree

Postby stubbsy on Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:44 pm

Dumb me - deleted the wrong post! :oops: Image now added above.
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Re: The Black Tree

Postby sheepie on Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:53 pm

To be brutal (so unlike me ;) ), it does nothing for me. You've lost too much of the subtle colouring and texture in your conversion to black and white. I'd like to see this redone with the colour just slightly muted - see how that goes :)
*** When getting there is half the fun! ***
User avatar
sheepie
Key Member
 
Posts: 3029
Joined: Sun Aug 08, 2004 11:56 am
Location: Picnic Point, Sydney Australia *** Nikon D200/D70 ***

Re: The Black Tree

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:06 pm

Doesn't work for me Peter, fails on the treatment, composition, just doesn't work Peter
User avatar
Alpha_7
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7259
Joined: Sun Aug 14, 2005 6:19 pm
Location: Mortdale - Sydney - Nikon D700, x-D200, Leica, G9

Re: The Black Tree

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:21 pm

I like it - the ferns give it context, and the B&W makes it look 1940's or so.
Regards, Patrick

Two or three lights, any lens on a light-tight box are sufficient for the realisation of the most convincing image. Man Ray 1935.
Our mug is smug
User avatar
Reschsmooth
Senior Member
 
Posts: 4164
Joined: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:16 pm
Location: Just next to S'nives.

Re: The Black Tree

Postby phillipb on Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:43 pm

The problem I have with this photo is that the tree doesn't stand out enough from the background. This may be a good candidate for selective colouring, Try restoring some colour in the ferns and the base below the tree.
__________
Phillip


**Nikon D7000**
User avatar
phillipb
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2599
Joined: Sat Aug 07, 2004 10:56 am
Location: Milperra (Sydney) **Nikon D7000**

Re: The Black Tree

Postby stubbsy on Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:20 pm

Thanks for your comments gentlemen. Here's the colour version.

Phillip - I tried selective colour but it didn't work.

Image
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Re: The Black Tree

Postby Pehpsi on Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:23 pm

Colour version much better, me reckons :up:
Nikon D70
12-24 DX, 18-70 DX, 70-200 VR

20" iMac Intel C2D
Aperture 2.1
PS CS3

http://www.jamesrobertphotography.com
User avatar
Pehpsi
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1418
Joined: Tue Nov 07, 2006 10:24 pm
Location: Kingsgrove, Sydney

Re: The Black Tree

Postby colin_12 on Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:43 pm

I agree with Phillip. It gets lost in the background as a B&W with the contrast given.
It does look OK in colour though.
Regards Colin
Regards Colin
Cameras, lenses and a lust for life
User avatar
colin_12
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1853
Joined: Thu Jan 04, 2007 7:10 pm
Location: Hazelbrook

Re: The Black Tree

Postby phillipb on Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:48 pm

I prefer the colour one Peter, but i thought I would try it out and you are right, selective colour wasn't much good.
I tried desaturating the greens and saturating the yellows and got this...

Image
__________
Phillip


**Nikon D7000**
User avatar
phillipb
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2599
Joined: Sat Aug 07, 2004 10:56 am
Location: Milperra (Sydney) **Nikon D7000**

Re: The Black Tree

Postby sheepie on Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:51 pm

That's much better Peter, but it's still not one of your better shots. I do like the tree though, especially the contrast in textures from one side to the other.

I know you've got better shots from the weekend, and look forward to seeing some of them :)
*** When getting there is half the fun! ***
User avatar
sheepie
Key Member
 
Posts: 3029
Joined: Sun Aug 08, 2004 11:56 am
Location: Picnic Point, Sydney Australia *** Nikon D200/D70 ***


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques