first try.... high key desaturated portrait

haven't really tried out my flash and shoot through umbrella much, so i thought I would have a go at a high key desaturated style portrait
I don't know if the hair is too dark for a high key shot

this may look a little too bright on screen but is set up for printing which always comes out darker
I don't know if the hair is too dark for a high key shot

this may look a little too bright on screen but is set up for printing which always comes out darker