#1 - The dark shadow along with the hard white of the girl do not really work IMO
#2 - I like the pose but feel that the lighting could be better controlled to give more of just the subject and in this instance, the shadow. Because the shadow is more detached than in #1 it gives a degree of separation which really works.
#3 - Does nothing for me
#4 - This just works so well and is IMO very Warholian
Re: A few for the week - Primary Colours!
Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 10:39 pm
by wendellt
i like the negative space in two because it gives more prominence to the model and thew snoot spot effect works great at isolating her
same deal on the 1st but the 2nd one is stronger sometimes for a stronger image the subject matter doesnt have to occupy the full frame
and the last lips shot is excellent, i'd take a bite out of that
Re: A few for the week - Primary Colours!
Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:39 am
by phillipb
#4 is the first photo I've seen where the copyright stamp actually adds to the image.
Re: A few for the week - Primary Colours!
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 9:11 pm
by Cre8tivepixels
Thanks Guys much appreciated
Dan
Re: A few for the week - Primary Colours!
Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 12:46 am
by W00DY
God I hope you made her a double cheese burger on the way out