Rock a my baby

Two seperate shoots for friends. With the first photo I had 30 mins but for the second I was mildly lucky on the 6th and last shot. (for the day) Although my friends love them, I wasn't sure about them both especially the second. Despite that, one has been enlarged and framed.
Your critique is appreciated.... How can I improve the lighting...etc


Your critique is appreciated.... How can I improve the lighting...etc

