My first shoot with this lighting gear

I've been home sick the past few days and this has given me time to catch up on my blog and has now given me a bit of time to put some work up here for you guys to have a look at.
A while back i got a bit of new lighting gear, nothing special really just some stands, brollies and wirless triggers. And instantly had a chance to have a play with on a family portrait type shoot for a couple I know.
I'm interested to know what you guys think,
First we went to a local park grounds in the late afternoon, this shot is my sb600 shooting through a white umberella mounted on my tripod (for portability)

After a ton of shots strobed and unstrobed we moved back to my place where a mateshift studio was constructed out of material and alligator clips.
High Key

And Low Key

Comments always welcomed,
Cheers
Adam
A while back i got a bit of new lighting gear, nothing special really just some stands, brollies and wirless triggers. And instantly had a chance to have a play with on a family portrait type shoot for a couple I know.
I'm interested to know what you guys think,
First we went to a local park grounds in the late afternoon, this shot is my sb600 shooting through a white umberella mounted on my tripod (for portability)

After a ton of shots strobed and unstrobed we moved back to my place where a mateshift studio was constructed out of material and alligator clips.
High Key

And Low Key

Comments always welcomed,
Cheers
Adam