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by surenj on Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:03 am
Thanks Cameron for organising this! As usual it was great to catch up with everyone and the 7D. Here is my take from the meet. The light was fading, tough and flat. I have gone for a artsy feel to rise to the occasion. Of course, light painting was something I couldn't resist. C & C much appreciated. Man vs Alien  Suicide fishing  Desolation  Stargate: destination far far away  It would also be nice to visit during sunrise just to see how it all looks in more directional light. [BTW LR doesn't recognise 7D raw files; perhaps I need to upgrade]
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by gstark on Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:26 am
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The second and third of these images are wonderful. Your treatments of both the subjects and the images are very well executed.
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by biggerry on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:44 am
cracking stuff suren, I really like the fisherman and the last light painted one, The light was fading, tough and flat I think you got some very good results considering the conditions 
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by marcotrov on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:59 am
I really like your collection here Suren. The first 3 are really terrific. Love the atnosphere you have generated. cheers marco
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by xerubus on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:09 am
Great series mate... nicely done. Really like the fisherman... 
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by Glen on Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:59 am
Suren great stuff, especially the last 3. The rock fisherman really grabs my attention
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by surenj on Tue Nov 03, 2009 5:08 pm
Thanks everyone for your comments. It would be great if we can get a fisherman to stay relatively still so we can capture him sharper. one strobe to get him to stand out would have been nice too. If anyone is game to check it out on a early morning, let me know. I am contemplating Saturday...... Sunday is the South Head meet. biggerry wrote:and the last light painted one
I think a study of these sculptures to purely lightpaint would yield very interesting results as well. They are the perfect subject to lightpaint... what do you think Gerry? Are you keen? I am really itching to do some strobist lights on these. There were some good ones on the Tamarama beach as well.... FYI: There are security guards around at night. I felt relatively secure when I was walking back to the car which was 25 mins away.
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by wendellt on Tue Nov 03, 2009 5:41 pm
Nice composition on the first image and i like what you are doing in the 3rd it looks very surreal it's nice to see you experimenting with lower shutterspeeds with the 2nd image well done
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by colin_12 on Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:52 pm
I really like the light in the first Suren. I think the last would look more impressive without the light leading to the subject if that if feasable. 
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by biggerry on Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:24 pm
what do you think Gerry? Are you keen?
keen FYI: There are security guards around at night. I felt relatively secure when I was walking back to the car which was 25 mins away.  i was worried when i got that message saying you were still 10 mins away from your car! I reckon you just about could have parked at home in kenso and walked all the way 
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by aim54x on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:13 pm
Great work...now I feel almost ashamed to have a look at my stuff....I really like the fisherman pic!
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by dviv on Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:39 am
aim54x wrote:I really like the fisherman pic!
Me too It looks a lot better on-screen than it did on the LCD 
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by DJT on Wed Nov 04, 2009 3:39 pm
Good stuff surenj, love the fisherman & desolation too.
Got a few days off work next week, will have to check it out
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by Matt. K on Wed Nov 04, 2009 11:23 pm
Suren You were on fire for that shoot! They are excellent images!Great to see some creativity working so well.
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by surenj on Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:28 pm
Matt. K wrote:You were on fire for that shoot!
Thanks Matt! dviv wrote:lot better on-screen than it did on the LCD
How did you see it on my LCD?? I did increase the contrast to make the waves look whiter.. DJT wrote:few days off work next week, will have to check it out
I would suggest either dusk or dawn. You will have some more control over the light that way. biggerry wrote:i was worried when i got that message saying you were still 10 mins away from your car! I reckon you just about could have parked at home in kenso and walked all the way  I didn't factor-in the uphill climb on the way back. By the time I got to the car, I was so exausted, I was tempted to sleep in the car!! colin_12 wrote:the last would look more impressive without the light leading to the subject if that if feasable
Colin, anything is feasible.  Thanks for your suggestion. Here is the one without the light leading the way. I wish I could try the lightpainting again.....I might not have any time.  Thanks all for your comments.
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by colin_12 on Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:36 pm
I like this latest version Surenj. 
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by Big V on Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:17 pm
This is a fantastic series.
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by surenj on Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:35 pm
Thankx colin and BigV.
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by dviv on Sat Nov 07, 2009 7:22 am
surenj wrote:dviv wrote:lot better on-screen than it did on the LCD
How did you see it on my LCD?? I did increase the contrast to make the waves look whiter..
You showed me! We were talking about the difference in the Canon LCD's - Turns out you were right 
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by surenj on Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:16 pm
dviv wrote:You showed me! We were talking about the difference in the Canon LCD's - Turns out you were right
I forgot about that! I thought the 7D might be able to snoop wirelessly into other Canon's in the area. 
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by dviv on Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:42 pm
surenj wrote:dviv wrote:You showed me! We were talking about the difference in the Canon LCD's - Turns out you were right
I forgot about that! I thought the 7D might be able to snoop wirelessly into other Canon's in the area. 
Now there's an idea!! 
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by Geoff M on Sun Nov 08, 2009 12:15 pm
Greta series, # 2 & 3 for me work best, also like #1 but would prefer to see it without the tog in frame although the inclusion does give a sense of scale to the sculpture.
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by surenj on Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:42 pm
dviv wrote:Now there's an idea!!
apart from a 5 and 7 shot bracketing and a 12 megapixel sensor with ISO 25000, this wireless snoop function is the only thing missing from this camera. Geoff M wrote:would prefer to see it without the tog in frame
Thanks for your suggestion Geoff. I am kicking myself because I didn't take a frame without the tog!!
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