Bun in the Oven

Hi,
while I have done a lot with insects, animals, plants and sport this is attempt 1 at something resembling a poitrait (my stepdaughter). The aim was to produce something personal, feminine, and fun.
While I know a large light and softbox will help I would appreciate C&C that will be easily achievable in the next couple of weeks (before they turn into baby photos) . Only PS was the twinkle on the ring and smoothing of streatch marks.
My gift ..

Invite to Baby Shower

Hopefull romatic shot to be given to dad

just for fun

50D 24-70 2.8, indirect window light , a couple of reflectors, desklamp on the background and flash on a stick
DebT
while I have done a lot with insects, animals, plants and sport this is attempt 1 at something resembling a poitrait (my stepdaughter). The aim was to produce something personal, feminine, and fun.
While I know a large light and softbox will help I would appreciate C&C that will be easily achievable in the next couple of weeks (before they turn into baby photos) . Only PS was the twinkle on the ring and smoothing of streatch marks.
My gift ..

Invite to Baby Shower

Hopefull romatic shot to be given to dad

just for fun

50D 24-70 2.8, indirect window light , a couple of reflectors, desklamp on the background and flash on a stick
DebT