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by biggerry on Sat Apr 10, 2010 6:07 pm
As usual a big thanks to Peter for organising, another big thanks to Philo and Matt for tasty food. It was an excellent morning with a nice walk to boot. I mainly concentrated on using the Macro and with Colin always in the distance pointing out some bizarre plant, insect thing, fungi and the like this was made much easier.... Whilst it is autumn there was plenty of little flowers, orchids, ants, spiders and teh list goes on... Critique, in particular macro technique definitely welcome.   check this dude out - missing half a leg...  fungi thingy - thanks to Colin.  haha, they are all laughing at me... 
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by Matt. K on Sat Apr 10, 2010 6:51 pm
Nice work Gerry! Your technique is immaculate!
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by wendellt on Sat Apr 10, 2010 6:58 pm
that 3rd one is great it has a very nice sense of dpeth with that shallow dpeth of field what macro lens are you using
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by surenj on Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:42 pm
#1, #3 and #5 are my favourites but #3 is the standout!
The lines leading in and out of the image as well as the great DOF and an interesting subject.
You are really working that 55mm! Did you use a tripod etc with speedlite??
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by biggerry on Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:30 pm
what macro lens are you using
55mm! Did you use a tripod etc with speedlite??
secondhand 55mm micro nikkor, bit of a well used old gal All shots had the SB600 flash onboard with the stofen diffuser thingybob, no tripod. I did use Andrews homemade softbox on some flower bell numbers with good results.. The thing with macro, with my setup anyway, it an be really hit and miss, I spent a good ten minutes trying to get a spider similiar to #2 and after about 15 shots I gave up, only one of those was barely usable..admittingly it was a bit windy and using only manual focus.. I think the best settings for my needs was f16 @ 1/250 or 1/180 with the flash dialled down just a fraction...
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by surenj on Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:38 pm
Hey Gerry, How close were you to the ant? 
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by biggerry on Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:53 pm
How close were you to the ant?
probably about 3-4 inches...lens hood to subject 
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by colin_12 on Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:37 pm
I like these Gerry. The Banksia is very good. 
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by Geoff on Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:41 pm
Stunning macros - well done!
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by daniel_r on Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:38 pm
Great Macro shots!
This is one of the great things about the meets - you get to see what caught someone elses 'eye'. The photos I have from the meet are completely different!
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by ATJ on Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:48 pm
All great shots, Gerry. Nice and sharp with good colour. My preference would be to tone back the contrast a bit, but that is a personal thing of mine.
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by Mr Darcy on Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:53 pm
Well done Gerry. #1 I would have liked to have seen more DOF, but it's still good. #3 Great capture. biggerry wrote:check this dude out - missing half a leg...  And the rest. This guy has really been in the wars. FYI Insects have SIX legs not four, let alone three and a half. Sadly most of my photos simply did not work out. Don't know if it was me or the camera, or both. Probably the former.
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by Jenno on Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:26 pm
#2 and 5 are the standouts out for me but all good. Never gave macro a thought in preparing for the meet  but you guys showed there was plenty of subject matter there
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by biggerry on Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:21 pm
My preference would be to tone back the contrast a bit, but that is a personal thing of mine
fair call! thats the kinda stuff I want to hear, when workign from the raw images I can find it hard where that right amount of contrast is... This guy has really been in the wars. FYI Insects have SIX legs not four, let alone three and a half. poor old fella..no wonder he was slow enough for me to take a picture of him! #1 I would have liked to have seen more DOF, but it's still good.
yeah, i was on about f8, I moved up to f13 and higher later on...hence my comment to you about your settings This is one of the great things about the meets - you get to see what caught someone elses 'eye' Never gave macro a thought in preparing for the meet but you guys showed there was plenty of subject matter there
hehe, I was gunning for the macro this day - I did the walk many years ago and remember it was a great one for flowers etc.. ta for the commenst and having a look.
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by heartyfisher on Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:41 pm
very nice macros .. was planing a surprise turn up but.. ah well other things came up.
The Ant is my Fav. 3.5 legs tells a great story and nicely captured! still giving you attitude in spite of the battles he has been through. All nice shots ..
You always use manual focus with macro lenses anyway... Thats one of the challenges. That old 55 is a real classic.!
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by Willy wombat on Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:59 pm
Eye catching work - very well done!!
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by craig.rohse on Sun Apr 11, 2010 11:24 pm
Very nice work Gerry, just love the last one and how good is the ant!?!
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by aim54x on Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:17 am
I love the Ant...trust you to find an ant with character.
The 55 was a lens that I really could have used today whilst lugging the FM2n loaded with Velvia on the Prince Henry Cliff Walk.
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by Ladybird on Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:56 am
Awesome macros! Love the fungi and the Banksia. FYI, the ant is female. So SHE has been the wars. 
I'll try to be a bit nicer, if you try to be a bit smarter.
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by photomarcs on Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:23 am
Hey mate!
One thing i have to say that isn't a critique from me, no matter what screen i look on, your colors always look great for some reason, it matches the composition really well.
Great work mate!
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by aim54x on Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:54 pm
Ladybird wrote:FYI, the ant is female. So SHE has been the wars. 
Your quite right! Male ants have wings dont they?
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by biggerry on Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:16 pm
You always use manual focus with macro lenses anyway... Thats one of the challenges. That old 55 is a real classic.!
yeah, mine is a newer one, has the AF screwdriver, sounds like a power drill full of sand! but still works a treat..shame you did not make it Tobi.. next time! trust you to find an ant with character.
or it found me FM2n loaded with Velvia on the Prince Henry Cliff Walk.
nioce, i wanna see scans of those FYI, the ant is female. So SHE has been the wars.
whoops, replace all previous references with old gal. Is that right that the males have wings? I learnt so much more about flora and fauna then anything else on the W/E your colors always look great for some reason, it matches the composition really well.
sweet, thanks! thats all for the comments and for a great 'educational' day - see, why would more people not want to come along!
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by stubbsy on Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:10 pm
INteresting how different images appeal to us differently. I like the #1 best. It's simple, but detailed if that makes any sense.
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