St. Albans Abbey through the Roman wall

Just my luck, of course - I set out on a mission to Verulamium park in bright sunshine, by the time I got there it had clouded over. Grr.
Here's my attempt to rescue the hopelessly dull original; any thoughts ?
Original;
Nikon Capture'd
Did I overdo it ? Obviously an improvement, but not 100% sure it's not too much.
Here's my attempt to rescue the hopelessly dull original; any thoughts ?
Original;

Nikon Capture'd

Did I overdo it ? Obviously an improvement, but not 100% sure it's not too much.