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Glorious Black & White

Postby stubbsy on Sun Nov 13, 2005 3:14 pm

Five captures from the weekend that seemed to lend themselves to the monochrome treatment. Hope you like. To see a larger version, click a pic.

24-120VR, 4 sec, F25
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24-120VR, 20 sec, F8
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50/1.4, 1/125, sec F2
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50/1.4, 1/400 sec, F2
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12-24 DX, 1/250 sec, F5.6
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Nov 13, 2005 3:24 pm

Great series of monochromatic images, and I'm hard pressed to pick a favourite.


#1 Least favourite, it just looks a little too bright and white, almost feels like glare is escape from behind the city, finding it hard to describe.. but my eyes don't like it.

#2 Nice shot, I think this one's been handled better then the first

#3 The Cornice, I really like... small intricate detail overlooked by 100's of visitors a day, captured with a great tonal range.

#4 and #5 like both of these shots, QVB has some lovely architecture and these two are great examples

Looks like you had a productive stay in Sydney (keeper wise)
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Nov 13, 2005 6:44 pm

Thanks Craig. Here's a colour version of #1:

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Nov 13, 2005 7:19 pm

Peter to be honest I prefer the colour version, btw where you using the 12-24 to take this ?
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:18 pm

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Postby joonha1004 on Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:24 pm

black and White...

I love you landscape... if you control more options with photoshop, it will be perfect to me...
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:30 pm

Nice work Peterrr. B&W really makes your images stand out.
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Postby ozczecho on Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:32 pm

Peter #3 and #4 are fantastic. By the looks of it you got heaps of keepers from the micro meet.
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Postby jethro on Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:42 pm

Stubsy how did you treat these IE: Ps work?
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Postby moggy on Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:42 pm

Nice pics Peter, I like the B&W as well as the colour. Great effort. :)

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Postby Potatis on Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:21 pm

Magnificant shots Stubbsy! I'm not so keen on the bright sky of #1, but the tones in the others are very beautiful. I love photo #2, and #3 is outstanding. Your eye is so good. Very inspiring stuff. Thankyou. :)
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:32 pm

Thank you all for your comments.

Craig - shot details are above each pic (the skyline was taken with 24-120 VR)

Jethro - All images were PP'd in Nikon Capture using the Nik Color Efex filters as follows: #1 - used B & W Tonal Enhancer, #2, #3 and #4 - used Paper Toner filter, #5 - used B & W Dynamic Contrast filter
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Postby E1Shane on Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:57 pm

Looks like the sky is blown in the first one, i like the monogrey in the second but its the 3rd shot that catches my eye. Love the contrast and flow of the image.
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Postby Greg B on Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:29 pm

Number 2 is my favourite, very nice quality to the lighting, bit different to other OH shots.

The others are good too, particularly #3
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:37 pm

Peter - As you may already have guessed, city skylines and the OH do absolutely nothing for me BUT #3, 4 and 5 are superb and take the snapshots of #1 and 2 into the realm of creativity in #3, 4 and 5 8)
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:43 pm

Expertly handled in #2, #3 and #5 peter. Beautifully taken. #2 tone and contrast excellent.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Nov 14, 2005 7:41 pm

Thanks Shane, Greg and Chris

Chris - I'm guessing you should avoid my night shots post then :wink:
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Postby pippin88 on Mon Nov 14, 2005 8:29 pm

#3 and #5 work perfectly Peter.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Nov 14, 2005 10:38 pm

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Postby MattC on Mon Nov 14, 2005 11:59 pm

Peter,

No. 1 is better as a colour shot. I like. I really enjoy the shot of the Opera House - looks great in B&W. Guess I enjoy the Sydney cityscapes because I am so far away from it.

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