A couple of Birds

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A couple of Birds

Postby Slider on Sun Dec 11, 2005 7:15 pm

Dinner time

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Postby cc@t on Sun Dec 11, 2005 8:01 pm

Mark No3 is superb - razor sharp, the only thing that detracts from it and it is very minor, is the spiderweb in front of its leg..
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Postby DionM on Sun Dec 11, 2005 8:34 pm

3rd one is great.

First 2 appear a little dark, maybe some fill-flash would have helped?

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Postby avkomp on Sun Dec 11, 2005 8:49 pm

really like the third shot.

2nd one doesnt do much for me.

like the 1st with the sun lighting the edges but think it would have been better with some fill flash on this side.

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Postby Slider on Sun Dec 11, 2005 8:57 pm

Thanks Guys, I did use the flash but was a fair way away. Beamer is next on the shopping list :lol:
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Postby DionM on Sun Dec 11, 2005 8:59 pm

Slider wrote:Thanks Guys, I did use the flash but was a fair way away. Beamer is next on the shopping list :lol:


I fail to see how a BMW will help; though it will be a damn sight better than that Bitsamissin you drive at present :wink:

If you are looking at placing an order for a better beamer from the US, let me know, as I have been thinking about getting one for my 580EX (could combine and save postage).

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Postby avkomp on Sun Dec 11, 2005 9:00 pm

the beamer will help for sure.

especially if you are using flash one the likes of D2x in high speed mode.

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Postby marcotrov on Sun Dec 11, 2005 10:03 pm

#3 is a bottler Mark. Great shot and very sharp with good eye contact.
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