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by Raskill on Tue Dec 13, 2005 6:40 pm
Ahoy hoy,
Just thought I'd post these, a little bit of something different. Took them today whilst conducting training at work. All taken with the 70-200 VR, didn't require to many shots to get the results I wanted. It's all about timing (and knowing when the shooter is going to pull the trigger  )
This one was a bit early, the second round has yet to be ejected from the pistol, but note all the debris being blown out the barrel. No cropping.
A bit better timing with this one, got two rounds in the air during a rapid fire sequence. No cropping.
My favourite from the day, note the remaining burning powder in the breach of the pistol. No cropping.
Taken from a safer angle. Had to crop this one a little bit just to centre the action.
Any comments appreciated. 
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by sirhc55 on Tue Dec 13, 2005 6:55 pm
Great sequence of shots that would have been an excellent choice for the last challenge 
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by Jeff on Tue Dec 13, 2005 7:15 pm
Hi Alan
Long time no speak,great shots good timing looks like the new lens is a good toy.
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by avkomp on Tue Dec 13, 2005 7:24 pm
looks like these were taken at maroubra/lakemba
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by Geoff on Tue Dec 13, 2005 7:27 pm
I agree with Chris - the 3rd shot would have been an ideal contender for the last challenge. 
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by MCWB on Tue Dec 13, 2005 7:49 pm
avkomp wrote:looks like these were taken at maroubra/lakemba Steve
 Cronulla too!
Great shots Alan, really captured the action! Would have loved to see a speeding bullet stopped in its tracks though. 
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by Killakoala on Tue Dec 13, 2005 8:24 pm
Sweet. You have an interesting job that requires this kind of practise.
Great images and it certainly takes great timing to get images like that.
Well done.
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by Onyx on Tue Dec 13, 2005 8:25 pm
How were the groupings?
Do these toys have enough firepower to produce sizeable muzzle blast? Did you happen to capture any?
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by Matt. K on Tue Dec 13, 2005 8:47 pm
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by PiroStitch on Tue Dec 13, 2005 8:55 pm
I thought it would've been macro style standing right next to the barrel 
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by stubbsy on Tue Dec 13, 2005 9:13 pm
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AN excellent group of lovely sharp pics. No question #3 is the standout. WHile it's necessary for you to have this sort of practice, I hope you have the good fortune of never having to use these skills.
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by jethro on Tue Dec 13, 2005 9:59 pm
Very nice group of pics, very sharp as well
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by MATT on Tue Dec 13, 2005 10:03 pm
Oh, great pics , shows the power of the 70-200 in good hands.
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by digitor on Tue Dec 13, 2005 10:03 pm
Nice work, catching the slide working on the Glock like that! I hope your electronic muffs were working OK.
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by marcotrov on Tue Dec 13, 2005 10:11 pm
I get the willies just looking at it. Let's hope they were shots at a practice target  Terrific series of shots Raskill. Interesting line of work you must have. I suppose you'll have to kill us if you tell us what you do
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by Raskill on Tue Dec 13, 2005 10:50 pm
Ahoy folks,
Thanks for all the comments. I agree the images look warm, but thats for two reasons, we were standing on a large bright yellow tarp, and it was about 32 degrees and bright as buggary. It helped by being able to use a fast shutter speed, but the day was blisteringly hot, with no breeze at all.
My job is a weapons trainer with the Police, so seeing how these turned out, I'll try to get some others again, maybe try for some better timing. My mate has just been sent to Cronulla for 5 days of 'fun' and wanted to borrow the camera and VR to get some action shots, but I politely declined....
Jeff, sorry mate, it has been a while. I'll email you. The VR is definetly a nice peice of kit, but I don't think the VR really impacted on the shots, I was pretty close anyway, these were taken around the 100 - 130 mm focal length, over the shoulder of the shooter. The lens is definetly sharp though.
Do these toys have enough firepower to produce sizeable muzzle blast? Did you happen to capture any?
The pistol is certainly powerful (take a smith & wesson .40 Cal round for the nerds playing at home) but not much muzzle blast. If it was darker you'd see more, you only really get big muzzle flash in movies where they add magnesium to the gun powder to make it look cool!
Thanks again for the comments folks!!!! 
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by Matt. K on Tue Dec 13, 2005 10:52 pm
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by Raskill on Tue Dec 13, 2005 11:06 pm
Yes, a social pest exterminator.....
It's definetly a full time job!
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