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Graphic zebra b&w

Postby rokkstar on Wed Dec 14, 2005 11:22 am

Went to the zoo with the inlaws yesterday. I just love the animals with graphic patterns on them. Would appreciate C&C on this one:

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Postby the foto fanatic on Wed Dec 14, 2005 11:27 am

I'm liking the B&W treatment.
Have you tried an even tighter crop?
In fact, just the head alone, with the eye breaking up those wonderful swirls, could be interesting.
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Postby cc@t on Wed Dec 14, 2005 12:15 pm

Excellent shot Matt - love it.
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Postby Nnnnsic on Wed Dec 14, 2005 12:15 pm

I like it Matt, but I think I'd like to see some detail separation from the nose / mouth with the rest of the body's stripes.
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Postby Matt. K on Wed Dec 14, 2005 12:18 pm

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:D Drop the middle tones right out using the curves tool. It's pure black and pure white only for that image.
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Dec 14, 2005 12:31 pm

Matt (Rokkstar), I'm with Matt (Matt. K) on this. You're on a winner and this shows a fantastic eye for the detail in a shot - just go to more contrasty B & W.
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Dec 14, 2005 1:59 pm

I think with this animal it's hard to tell whether the photo is B&W or not. :)

At first i thought it was two zebras in the frame.

I agree with the two above me. Total black and white would be great. No grey.
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Dec 14, 2005 2:38 pm

IMO there needs to be be more definition as a photo or you could try threshold in PSCS - anything from 55 to 112 to give it a more graphic quality 8)
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Postby rokkstar on Wed Dec 14, 2005 9:05 pm

Thanks guys.
The separation between nose and body was something I wasn't sure about. I tried doing some dodging to lift it but it didn;t work.
Cricketfan, my immediate thought was to crop it tighter, because I think the dark space top right distracts somewhat.
I'll play with the curves to drop the middle tones.
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Postby DaveB on Wed Dec 14, 2005 10:30 pm

rokkstar wrote:The separation between nose and body was something I wasn't sure about. I tried doing some dodging to lift it but it didn;t work.

The best solution I can think of is to move the camera slightly to the left or right so the end of the nose wasn't against a black background (I know we can see dark hairs against the white, but it's too subtle).

I like this a lot though!
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