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Well spotted Craig that is really nice, wish I had thought of it
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Love it Craig - well spotted...
I'd be tempted to clone out that blemish on the wall just in front of his eyes... but otherwise superb... Cheers, John
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Very nice shot Alpha. Makes you ask a lot of questions, like where is he going, is he a blindman with a cane, is he walking the dog. The longer i looked at it the more questions I began to ask, very nice, well done. POTW material!!!!
Mal
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An interesting concept the shadow in itself, but the lines of the wall tend to take the my eyes from the main image constantly - your second shot, IMO, is far better than this one.
Chris
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Thanks everyone for the feedback, I think I prefer my second shot a little more to this one... The 2nd took almost no PP work, this one was a little more fiddly.. I already cloned out a few distractions.. but..(good spot John) I missed the bit right infront of the shadow....
I was interested in Mal's response.. as I took the shot so knew it was a fishing rod... I didn't even assume people would wonder..because I knew... a great example of the image being in the eye of the beholder. Chris - I did play with having the wall a lot softer.. and bringing out the shadow.. didn't really get the result so stuck with this more true to life version (and I agree the 2nd shot is better).
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