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by antman on Sun Feb 19, 2006 12:59 pm
Just a series of pics from Narrabeen pool.
Taken late at Fri night / early Sat morning - exposures in the order of 120-150s. 1st time I have tried talking bulb exposures. Most difficult thing was just trying to compose the picture as it was pretty bloody hard to see anything. So got a few crooked horizons.
All picutres have been pp'd.
I have also noticed some purple spots/areas on some of the longer exposures (top left hand corner) which became more evident with pp'ing. Anyone got any ideas of the cause ? Lens was tokina 12-24.

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by Geoff on Sun Feb 19, 2006 1:11 pm
Geoff - these are supurb, all of them!! Very nice indeed but my fave is no.2.
What are you up to very early tomorrow? I'm heading to Harbord Beach for a pre-dawn shoot. PM me if interested.
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by antman on Sun Feb 19, 2006 1:28 pm
Thanks Geoff.
Unfortunately have to work  . Thanks for the offer.
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by stubbsy on Sun Feb 19, 2006 1:32 pm
Geoff C
These have a very eerie feel to them. All are good, but #3 works best for me. In #2 I'd also do something about the tiny bit of path in the lower left corner.
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by BBJ on Sun Feb 19, 2006 1:39 pm
Geof, i think these pics look cool. Well done for giving it a go and i would be happy with these so yeh i like them all o dont think there is anything i would change with these.
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by daniel_r on Sun Feb 19, 2006 1:46 pm
antman wrote:I have also noticed some purple spots/areas on some of the longer exposures (top left hand corner) which became more evident with pp'ing. Anyone got any ideas of the cause ? Lens was tokina 12-24.
Antman, that's the CCD starting to heat up with the longer exposure. It's not harming the camera, and the recommended way to avoid it is to use the Long Exposure Noise Reduction (NR) feature. (p133 D70 users guide).
It works by processing a dark frame (ie sensor is activated for the same time as the original exposure, but the shutter isn't opened. The dark frame is then compared to the original and the noise subtracted). Essentially it will double your total time per frame.
There's a couple of threads on the forum about this from memory.
edit: found a thread
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by antman on Sun Feb 19, 2006 2:07 pm
Thanks for that Daniel. Thought that it may have been that. Interesting to see it tend to occur in the top left hand side of the sensor.
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by LostDingo on Sun Feb 19, 2006 3:49 pm
I like 2 and 3 but all are well done. The moon adds for interesting lighting creating the eeriness, well done 
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by Onyx on Sun Feb 19, 2006 3:57 pm
If you hadn't had pointed out the hot noise in the upper left corner, I wouldn't have consciously noticed it. These are great shots. Very sublime feel to them.
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by wendellt on Sun Feb 19, 2006 4:03 pm
amazing the tone and mood are just fantastic, almost looks liek a day shot at high shutterspeed but with the added spookness of the subtle star trails
images liek these make my heart boil
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by antman on Mon Feb 20, 2006 10:10 pm
Just a quick thankyou for the comments.
Appreciate the feedback.
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by owen on Mon Feb 20, 2006 10:19 pm
Great shots. I've heard that the purple glow can possibly be glow from the battery. Not sure though.
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by marcotrov on Mon Feb 20, 2006 10:40 pm
I really like #2 and #3. Terrific images. A very moody and magical feel to them
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by Slider on Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:16 pm
Fantastic photos Geoff. Must get out one of these moonlit nights and find some water 
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by pgatt on Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:32 pm
Nice work antman, tried a few of these lately, none as nice as these. Was up at Palm Beach Sunday morning so not too far from there! Nice area huh?
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by sirhc55 on Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:36 pm
Geoff - the lower angle of #3 lifts this pic, IMO, above the rest - a convoluted pun 
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by BT*ist on Tue Feb 21, 2006 11:12 pm
Wow! Otherworldly.
Great shots Geoff! First one particularly.
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by Sheila Smart on Wed Feb 22, 2006 11:10 am
I have taken so many pics of this walkway but none have come close to this. Well done indeed.
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by mudder on Wed Feb 22, 2006 8:37 pm
An excellent series, nice angles and you've captured the mood of the scene really well... Nice ambience... Well done.
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by Bretski on Wed Feb 22, 2006 10:22 pm
Great shots... the last is my pic... awsome
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by jethro on Wed Feb 22, 2006 10:35 pm
No 1 does it for me
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shoot it real.
look! and see. Shoot and feel
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by antman on Thu Feb 23, 2006 1:56 pm
Thanks again for all the kind comments.
Looking forward to the next full moon !
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