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Latin Dancers (Broadband Only)

Postby nito on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:01 pm

As promised here are some shots from the latin americian dance show. All shots were on a 70-200VR lens at iso800. Exposure compensation varied between -1.0 to 0.3.

The show was great. My family and I really enjoyed it.
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Critiques are welcomed. I know some shots are soft, but it was really difficult to capture movement without blurr.

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Postby LOZ on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:04 pm

Nitro all I can see is 18 little boxes ?
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Postby nito on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:07 pm

Loz, is it working now?
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Postby huynhie on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:11 pm

Very nice photo's there nito, I love the vibrant colours.
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Postby LOZ on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:11 pm

no but the slideshow was great :wink:
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Postby Oneputt on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:15 pm

Nito nice colours and action. I think that No17 is the pick :D
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:16 pm

Nghia

I can see them and they show of the quality of pics this lens can deliver in the right hands. With so many images it's hard to comment on all of them, so here are some things that jumped out at me:

#5 - probably the best capture here, but I'd suggest you crop the RHS to remove the two people on the right and make this a portrait crop. The expression on the young girl's face on the RHS makes this a great part of the image too, so I'd suggest a second crop that just includes her too.

#15 - great capture of the dancer's expression, but the pano style crop seems odd. I'm guessing you had to remove something from the bottom (audience heads?), but if not a slightly taller aspect ration would make the image even better

#17 - I know it's soft, but the girl's expression and the lovely strong blue & silver colours really appeal.
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Postby Alex on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:23 pm

Some great shots there Nito.


No.1 is a bit too dark for my taste.

No.3 has some strange colour casts on my monitor.

No.4 - really like this one.

No.5 - really like this one, but agree might be better with a crop

No. 17 is a bit soft, but very nice composition nevertheless.

Great work!

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:23 pm

I really like the third one, I'd suggest you could even make a stunning image out of just a crop of the girl in the dress.
I also really like the 11th shot too.
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Postby huynhie on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:24 pm

LOZ wrote:no but the slideshow was great :wink:


I have to agree there as well. :wink:
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Postby spada on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:28 pm

Hi
Nice color , fast motion blur. you 've done a good work .This lens is on my list.

Thank for sharing

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Postby nito on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:41 pm

Thanks for the comments guys. It's very encouraging.


Peter,

#5, I was debating on that very issue. I kept it for the colour, but the real focus is the girl.

#15, it wasnt because of audience heads. Thought it would flow better as a pano. But I do see your point on giving a tall aspect ratio. I'll play with it and see what happens.

#17, yeah that was a hard capture. They keep on moving.

Alex,

#3, was over blown in exposure. Still adjusting the camera during that period. Unfortunately its not very recoverable no matter the software.
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Postby drifter on Sun Mar 26, 2006 8:13 pm

#17 is my pick . Lovely colour
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Postby wendellt on Sun Mar 26, 2006 8:43 pm

some amazing photos there
I am jealous

dance is one of the best things to photograph so animated colourful and full of dynamism

i like the ones with the ofsett tight composition

16, 19, 4
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Postby nito on Sun Mar 26, 2006 9:11 pm

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Like this peter?

Craig, still working on your suggestion. I am trying to get rid of the highlights on her face. :?
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Postby antman on Sun Mar 26, 2006 9:25 pm

I like expression of the guy in No 12.

I think he was a bit upset that they made him wear the hat.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Mar 26, 2006 11:05 pm

nito wrote:Like this peter?

Much better, but I'd still like a touch more at the bottom if there's anything there
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