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The Barn

Postby Slider on Wed Apr 05, 2006 11:54 pm

One from my travels today.

D70s with Sigma 10-20 at 10mm
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Postby pharmer on Wed Apr 05, 2006 11:56 pm

Nice composition and exposure.

Love the green long grass and the moody grey sky - GND filter on that? Or blended exposure?
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Postby Bob G on Thu Apr 06, 2006 12:01 am

Nice Shot Mark

Out of interest - where was that taken


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Postby avkomp on Thu Apr 06, 2006 12:11 am

love the exposure.

lots of grass doesnt do it for me though. I liked it more pano cropped from the bottom removing some grass.

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Postby Slider on Thu Apr 06, 2006 12:12 am

pharmer wrote:Nice composition and exposure.

Love the green long grass and the moody grey sky - GND filter on that? Or blended exposure?


Thanks Pharmer, blended the sky in as it was all blown with the foreground nicely exposed.

Bob G wrote:Nice Shot Mark

Out of interest - where was that taken


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Thanks Bob, it was on the Gympie-Brooloo Road about 12k from Imbil. Passed it a hundred times and keep saying to myself that I must get a shot of that old barn, so I did :D
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Postby Slider on Thu Apr 06, 2006 12:14 am

avkomp wrote:love the exposure.

lots of grass doesnt do it for me though. I liked it more pano cropped from the bottom removing some grass.

Well done.

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Thanks Steve,

I pondered over a pano crop but decided to leave it full. I quite like all the grass in front.
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Apr 06, 2006 6:43 am

Ah I know where that is. Mitedo and I photographed that when we first got our D70s. Nice job Mark.
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Postby Slider on Thu Apr 06, 2006 11:04 pm

At Steve's suggestion here is another one which had the barbed wire fence in front and came up well as a pano crop

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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Apr 06, 2006 11:08 pm

I really like the second image and I think it really works as a Pano, nicely done! Good blending too!
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Postby blacknstormy on Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:58 pm

Mark - missed this till now - love the first shot, but Pano is even better !!!!
Beautiful job (as always) - would look fantastic in a rustic frame ....
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Postby Alex on Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:44 pm

Very nice. I prefer the pano version.

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Postby Slider on Fri Apr 07, 2006 8:02 pm

Thanks again Folks,

I think Steve was right. The more I look at teh two, the more I am liking the pano. Might have to do an old fence paling frame for this one :D
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Postby Zeeke on Fri Apr 07, 2006 8:14 pm

Mark, another brilliant shot, ive seen this barn hundreds of times while going to Borumba Dam... its one thing id always like to photograph.. but the folks im travelling with dont want to stop for 10mins.. I had a play with your image while im waiting for my ride north to show up.. again.. all i did was play with the curves...i dont know why.. but i always like making images moody.. sorry heh

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Postby Finch on Fri Apr 07, 2006 8:14 pm

Mark,

Like Rel, I also missed this one and I must say it is a corker! I love the feel of it, the composition and the great angle achieved by that workhorse of yours, the 10-20mm lens.

Pano is great and definitely will work blown up BIG with a rustic timber frame (as others have said).

Another contender for the POTW, I'd say

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Postby drifter on Fri Apr 07, 2006 8:43 pm

I love the first one .Great composition . Cool . Lovely colour .
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Postby Neeper on Sat Apr 08, 2006 11:47 am

I love the mood of this photo. It's awesome.
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Postby mitedo on Sat Apr 08, 2006 11:55 am

Great shot Mark i like the last one very moody 8)
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Postby gstark on Sat Apr 08, 2006 11:58 am

Works better as a pano for me.

In the first, there's too much foreground, which I think is competing with the barn as the primary subject of the image. The pano addresses that problem.

The EXIF is saying that this was shot at 10mm, but I'm not getting that feeling from the image. I'm wondering how a reshoot of this might go, but taken, again at 10mm, but moving a little closer. One of the beauties of shooting that wide is that you should be able to make the subject apppear relatively large against a distant background, and I'm wondering how (or even if) that might even improve this image further.
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Postby pharmer on Sat Apr 08, 2006 12:06 pm

I'm going to pipe up and say I prefer the original over the pano's.

Removing the long green grass has taken away a lot of the interest in the photo from my perspective. (I loved the way the green grass stalks contrasted againt the sky)

Can't please everyone eh? :)
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Postby Slider on Sat Apr 08, 2006 12:21 pm

Thanks again for the comments Folks :D

Gary, I'll definately be taking a few more next time I'm up there.
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Postby gstark on Sat Apr 08, 2006 1:56 pm

pharmer wrote:Can't please everyone eh? :)


And that, IMHO, is a good thing.
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Postby mudder on Sun Apr 09, 2006 12:06 am

I prefer the pano version but then again losing the grass in the foreground seems to leave the old barn needing something as additional interest, I think it's just the side of the barn having little detail other than the water tanks... Wondering about perhaps including the front verandah in the shot?

Might also be tempted to do some judicial burning of the grass in front of the barn to make the barn look like it's in a "spot" of light sort of thing, as though the sun is breaking through a gap in the clouds or something maybe? Just thinking about adding "mood"...

Have a thing for old stuff like this and enjoyed the image, thanks for posting...
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Postby byrt_001 on Sun Apr 09, 2006 12:18 am

hi

both are great shots, personaly i like the first one for the details on the grass.

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Postby Bretski on Sun Apr 09, 2006 12:22 am

Nice pic Mark

I really like the green grass in contrast to the rest of the pic...

I reakon it would look great if you make everything black and white except the grass...
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