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Postby gstark on Sun Apr 16, 2006 1:59 pm

Er, I mean Carrs Park, in Sydney's south.

I've been through the area countless times, but never taken a moment to actually visit this place, so when Lynn (Nikkofan) suggested this as a location for a day's shooting, I said "why not?".

And it's a beautiful location, in Port Hacking(I think) just a stone's throw from Tom Ugly's Bridge, with a small, calm beach, netted, beautiful grassed areas ... it actually reminds me of Bronte Beach in the sort of family oriented vibe it gives off. Highly recommended.

This is the old sandstone house ...

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This fella just loved getting his image snapped

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He just sat there, posing ...

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And Lynn ...

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A few more from the day can be found here.
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Postby big pix on Sun Apr 16, 2006 2:08 pm

is the cottage leaning to the left a bit......... good to see a few pix's from you Gary...... I like the shots of the birds........ :lol: :lol:
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Postby gstark on Sun Apr 16, 2006 2:12 pm

Bernie,

There's maybe 1 degree of lean in the image ... but I suspect that the tree on the right might make it look like there's more.

That bird was really very cooperative, just sitting there, I'd say move your head to the left, look up, and he did.

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Postby big pix on Sun Apr 16, 2006 2:21 pm

its ok now as I have put a small book under the moniter....... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Alex on Sun Apr 16, 2006 2:32 pm

Like No.2. Like the way the bid parallels the tree branch.

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Postby wmaburnett on Sun Apr 16, 2006 2:43 pm

Awesome pics and good lighting!
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Postby leek on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:20 pm

Good to see some photos from you Gary...

I'm interested why you chose to blow the sky in the cottage and bird photos... Were you using spot metering?

While the bird photos have good composition, there seems to be quite a lot of CA at the edge of the tree trunk - did this come from the PP treatment?

Great portrait of Lyn as well...
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Postby gstark on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:31 pm

John,

It was a very bright day and I chose to (spot) meter on the chest of the bird, who is heavily backlit. Consequently the sky is well and truly blown, but that doesn't bother me all that much, because this isn 't an image of the sky. Fancy that. :)

A part of the consequence of that decision though is what you are seeing at the edges of the sky and the tree, and as well as on the edges of the bird to a lesser degree.

I have a few where I used some fill to reduce the contrast range, but I've not yet had a look/play with those images. My suspicion is that the bird was a bit too far away for effective fill (onboard flash only) but I'll try to look at those before the end of the weekend.

There is very little PP on these, btw.

Alex, yes, me too, especially when I saw how this came out. The parallel lines of the bird/tree work very well here, I think.

William, bright sunlight is always a challenge.

Bernie: I've tilted the server, so you can remove the book now. :)
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Postby jethro on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:41 pm

Hey gary I cant remember an image from you maybe ive been too slack.
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:54 pm

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Unusual shot of the bird....and then there's the magpie! :D :D :D
Nice to see you out and about and posting pics....an activity you don't do enough of.
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Postby gstark on Sun Apr 16, 2006 6:16 pm

Matt, Jethro,

I need to get out more and walk the dog.

Oh yeah ... don't have one of those, do I?
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Apr 16, 2006 7:25 pm

I agree with the observation of being out and about with your camera Gary - superb example of Sigma glass pics :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Geoff on Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:08 pm

That bird in the last photo (the one in blue) is a good shot too - u don't often see this variety on the other side of the lens :)
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Postby gstark on Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:37 pm

Geoff wrote:That bird in the last photo (the one in blue) is a good shot too - u don't often see this variety on the other side of the lens :)


In fact, I also have a couple of shots of that one behind bars. Follow the link in my intial post and you'll see one of them.
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Postby mudder on Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:43 pm

Love the second shot of the maggie, I can almost hear him warbling "what the heck are you doing?"... Love the interested pose...
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Postby radar on Sun Apr 16, 2006 9:25 pm

Nice to see some pics of yours Gary :D

I find that when I walk the dogs, I leave the camera at home. Picking up after them is awkward with a camera around your neck :shock:

They also tend to scare birds away :roll:

Unless I think that it will be a nice sunrise, then I still take the camera.

I love the second of the maggies as well, really has attitude.

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Postby blacknstormy on Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:16 pm

About time you posted some shots Gary !!!!!!
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Postby Manta on Sun Apr 16, 2006 11:16 pm

gstark wrote:My suspicion is that the bird was a bit too far away for effective fill (onboard flash only)


Another potential Better Beamer customer? :wink:

Nice shots Gary - like the composition of the house, the detail of the maggie (i'm a fan of spot-metering as well) and the particularly natural pose in Lynn's portrait.

You should get out from behind that tilted server more often.
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Postby ABG on Thu Apr 20, 2006 1:45 pm

Just came across this post and I'm almost certain that this is the first post I've seen of Gary's that has any images (I am yet to see a single image from the venerable Birddog too). The portrait of Lynn and the second shot of the magpie are absolute rippers. As has been said numerous times already in this post, it'd be nice to see more photos from you Gary :) (and at least one from you Birdy... :P ).

For the record, it's spelt Carss Park and is on Kogarah Bay, not Port Hacking.
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Postby Glen on Thu Apr 20, 2006 2:18 pm

ABG, for the record Gary has posted quite a few times before and I have also seen a post of Birddy's with some shots of the Chinese Gardens and Darling Harbour. It is easy to see Birddy's images, just click on his name, then click on the line "all posts by Birddog 114", then just sort through till you find it :lol:
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