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Postby jethro on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:35 pm

Been MIA for ages. Been shooting heaps, but ive had no time at all. Im trying different types of imaging. What do the masses think?

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Postby wendellt on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:40 pm

love the flowing hair the treatment is good too
but maybe next time try it outside with a contrasty background say at sunset with the flash illuminating the subject that would look kick ass sweet!
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Postby jethro on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:43 pm

thanks wendellt, you are the master of this type of imaging
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:45 pm

Jethro
The first image is stunning! Perfect! The second is excellent! Brilliant work.... and how lucky are you to have that model? I can see this printed on 100% cottonrag paper...very large, and tasetfully framed.

Bloody great photography!
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Postby NetMagi on Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:51 pm

both great shots, but I'd agree the second would be stronger with a different background

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Postby blacknstormy on Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:21 pm

Love the first image - looks like an add for some 'funky' new hair product !!!
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Postby Manta on Sun Apr 16, 2006 11:07 pm

Love them both Jethro - and welcome back - but you've trimmed the lad's hair in the first one!!
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Postby wmaburnett on Mon Apr 17, 2006 4:17 am

Very nice, although the line in the second is a bit distracting to me, you could try to clone it out in photoshop, but other then that i like them a lot!
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Postby macka on Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:44 am

I really like both of these. I agree with the others about the vertical line in the second, but otherwise great shot!
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