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Postby stubbsy on Sun Apr 23, 2006 9:12 pm

This weekend was the 21st annual Hunter Valley Steamfest. Over the weekend three steam trains (the 3112, 3830 and 3801) and 2 rail motors travel between Maitland and various destinations. A number of other activities also happen at the same time, with lots of old steam powered farm equipment and machinery on show and (oddly) a classic and vintage car show (no steam in sight).

These images are from the car show (doh!). For bigger, click the pic.

EDIT: Add 4th image

Somehow I get the feeling these cars don't get driven much.

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Two shots of the same car, 10.5DX fisheye first
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and 24-120VR next
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Postby daniel_r on Sun Apr 23, 2006 9:27 pm

peter,

#3 is the pick here... It's quite catching - strong lines, strong colour. Well controlled flare on the tip of the hood too, with just the right angle to show a bit of windscreen at the top.

#1 - carefully composed so that you don't recognisably appear in any of the reflections from what I can see :)
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Postby byrt_001 on Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:38 pm

hi

yes my vote goes to number 3 too...excellent love the colours too.

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Postby gstark on Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:50 pm

Peter,

Truly stupendous shots of those steam trains and rail motors. You've done well.

But why is Brocky signing his name on 3801?

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Postby Manta on Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:53 pm

Stunning colour and clarity Peter!
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Postby avkomp on Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:54 pm

some great stuff here peter, well saturated and well composed.

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Postby nito on Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:59 pm

Peter, number 1 and 3 are remarkable. I like the angle of the shot for no. 3. It highlights the outstanding nose of the car. No.1 is simplistic but was elegantly captured.
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Postby huynhie on Mon Apr 24, 2006 9:26 am

Number three for me Peter.

The middle one is just a Taxi engine that three blokes scribbled on :lol:
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Postby wmaburnett on Mon Apr 24, 2006 11:11 am

#3 is great, definatly somethin i could see hanging in my garage with the car stuff! Well done!
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Postby blinkblink on Mon Apr 24, 2006 12:08 pm

That first one is wheely nice.


Sorry, couldn't resist. :oops:
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Apr 24, 2006 3:52 pm

Thanks you all for your comments. I must admit #3 is my favourite by far.

Daniel - Yes - I went to some trouble to avoid my reflection in the hub - I lay flat on the ground so my reflection is where the badge in the centre is so you can't see me.

Gary - :lol: can't be the 3801 it's grey
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Apr 24, 2006 3:56 pm

Peter - #3 is my pick here, love the colour and the lines / vents, nice stuff

#1 I also appreciate the trouble you went to avoiding your reflection in the first shot. The tyres are in such good nick too ;)

#2 Doesn't do too much for me, the reflections I find distracting.
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Postby Alex on Mon Apr 24, 2006 7:01 pm

No.3 is great. Like no.2 also.

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Apr 24, 2006 7:22 pm

Thanks Craig and Alex.

I've just added a 4th image at the top. A shot of the same car grille in #3 taken without the fish eye.
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Postby LostDingo on Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:33 pm

Love the exaggeration of number 3, great capture, will make a great print :idea: :idea:
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Postby huynhie on Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:38 pm

That's funny,

If you hadn't have told me, I'd say image three was a different car to image four (from the horizontal chrome to the vertical part of the grill in the middle).
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Postby pippin88 on Tue Apr 25, 2006 7:18 am

Very nice Peter.

Colours are very rich and strong.

#3 is my favourite, great use of the fisheye.
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Postby marcotrov on Tue Apr 25, 2006 8:59 am

#3 is the vibrant winner here Peter. Visually dramatic. I'm starting to feel a need for this lens :wink:
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Apr 27, 2006 7:15 pm

Thanks guys - and Andrew I was surpised at the difference in the two images as well.

Marco you NEED that lens :lol:
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