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by Bob G on Tue May 23, 2006 7:24 pm
A friend asked me today if I would photograph their black poodle as it apparently doesnt have much longer to live.
She dressed it up in a wedding dress which it wore to their son's wedding late last year.
Anyway I wasn't that confident about photographing a black dog who is blind and the eyes don't look to good. As well as that it was a dark overcast day.
Thought I'd have a try and used a grey card for exposure reading, bracketed and shot in raw (don't you love technology)
Here's the result both in Colour and B&W
Which do you prefer?
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by Glen on Tue May 23, 2006 7:57 pm
Bob, that came out great. I like both, would print one of each for the owners
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by NJ on Tue May 23, 2006 8:04 pm
i think the colour one personally. i think you need to be able to see the colours it is dressed up in...and the paint on its nails 
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by Bob G on Tue May 23, 2006 8:17 pm
Thanks Glen,
That's exactly what I did. Printed both on Archival Matt A3 paper on my Epson 2400
Both camr up very nicely and they were very pleased- indicating they will frame and hang.
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by MCWB on Tue May 23, 2006 8:23 pm
The colour one looks better for mine, the B&W one looks a bit washed out, needs a bit more contrast maybe.
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by Bob G on Tue May 23, 2006 10:25 pm
MCWB
Thanks for your comments
I finished up with the contrast adjustment as the last step in my PP.
When I went higher and I lost too much detail. I realise that the photo is not as black as the dog in reality, but I am a bit at sea here. The end result is a compromise because I did't know where else to go with it.
Not sure if its just this shot or whether all predominantly black subjects are difficult.
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by Zeeke on Tue May 23, 2006 10:41 pm
G'day Bob, by the looks, Chloe is a chocolate poodle.. pretty hard to take photos of because there eyes are a dark brown and naturally blend in with there woolen fur .. i can tell you used a sheet to create the background and uve boosted the contrast to whiten it out and give it a really white backing, making Chloe the subject, the only problem is, she's lost alot of her natural colours by the tones.. heres a sample I just worked on, Hope you dont mind, all I did was colour select Chloe so only she was selected, then selected "Shadow/Highlight"and turned down the shadow and boosted the highlight, it makes her fur a fraction darker and more natural while keeping the background white
Heres the finished subject, hope you dont mind, if you want it taken down, lemme know
Tim
p.s. its a great pic, the dog lovers will love it!
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by Bob G on Tue May 23, 2006 10:51 pm
Tim,
Looks good and a definate improvement. By the way the dog is definately black but due to its age like most of us its going a little grey mostly round the face - no hint of any choclate.
There was a lot of ochre coloured walls around where we were shooting and we were under a shade sail - lots of reflected light and non ideal conditions.
Anyway - thanks for your input
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by admajic on Tue May 23, 2006 11:49 pm
Great emotion in the face of the dog! Its saying get me OUT of here!
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by Bob G on Wed May 24, 2006 3:01 am
Here's another one I took - maybe it's a better one.
C & C Invited
Cheers
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by JordanP on Wed May 24, 2006 7:31 am
Hi Bob,
While I like the first one - I much prefer the shot just posted. I think it is a much more pleasing composition, and provides a better view of the detail in Chloe's face. A clear winner for me.
Cheers,
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by Bob G on Wed May 24, 2006 10:55 am
Thanks for your comments Craig - I agree.
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by Greg B on Wed May 24, 2006 11:32 am
Bob, I like the second colour one.
And I am surprised that no-one else has commented on this
She dressed it up in a wedding dress which it wore to their son's wedding late last year.
little bit of strangeness. 
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by Zeeke on Wed May 24, 2006 11:33 am
Greg, nothing strange about that in this community, you'd have to be a little nutty
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by MCWB on Wed May 24, 2006 11:58 am
The second one is better Bob, great pose! 
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by Yi-P on Wed May 24, 2006 2:49 pm
I like the second one pretty much, very cool one
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