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by Sir Tristram on Sun May 28, 2006 11:25 pm
I shot these over the weekend
Picture 1. I think I need to get my head around getting a correct depth of field as I think the left part of his plumage is soft. The lighting was really hard as he was in the undergrowth when I shot it.
Picture 2. This is just about a full image with minimal amount of cropping. He was just about too close.
Any suggestions on how these could have been better?
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by avkomp on Mon May 29, 2006 1:11 am
gotta get me one of those lenses!!
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by birddog114 on Mon May 29, 2006 7:56 am
John,
Any suggestions on how these could have been better?
My suggestion is:
Surrender that lens  and geting the 70-300G 
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by Sir Tristram on Mon May 29, 2006 8:32 am
Yeah I was thinking of dumping it and going back to the 70-300G as it clearly is not cutting it quality wise. And I know AVKOMP would give me a quick $500 for it too.
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by birddog114 on Mon May 29, 2006 8:33 am
Sir Tristram wrote:Yeah I was thinking of dumping it and going back to the 70-300G as it clearly is cutting it quality wise. And I know AVKOMP would give me a quick $500 for it too.
You're spoiled!
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by Sir Tristram on Mon May 29, 2006 8:39 am
Way too true. I might steal the bio of one of the other users " way too much gear, not enough talent" 
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by NJ on Mon May 29, 2006 8:19 pm
#2 is amazingly sharp! can i ask what lens you used? love the composition as well.
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by Sir Tristram on Mon May 29, 2006 8:27 pm
Thanks for the comment. The lense was a Nikon 300mm AFS-II 2.8
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by Alpha_7 on Mon May 29, 2006 8:51 pm
Beautiful stuff, my favourite is the 2nd one, I like the alert look in the birds eye.
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by Sir Tristram on Mon May 29, 2006 10:05 pm
Thanks Craig. I think that look should be called the " I mean business" look.
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by jethro on Mon May 29, 2006 10:53 pm
Geez No 2 is probably one of the sharpest images Ive seen on this site. Well done
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by Sir Tristram on Tue May 30, 2006 8:52 am
Thanks Jethro. 
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by kipper on Tue May 30, 2006 8:44 pm
Lovely lens, will have to get a VR version of that one day 
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by suzanneg on Tue May 30, 2006 8:56 pm
That owl eye is fantastic!
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by Sir Tristram on Tue May 30, 2006 9:51 pm
Thanks all for the feedback. Yeah I'd love a VR version but I first have to get those 6 numbers and the supplementary right. 
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