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by Killakoala on Wed Jul 05, 2006 12:52 pm
Rather than freeze to death in Australia, i am spending two months, at tax payers expense, in glorious Hawaii. Thankyou all tax payers on the forum. I appreciate your generosity. (I am doing some work here as well, so don't worry. These were taken on a Sunday)
Panoramas of Waikiki and Honolulu, depending which way i was pointing the camera.
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Technical details - Nikon D2h and Sigma 12-24mm. Handheld.
Towards Honolulu.
Towards Waikiki and Diamond Head.
Waikiki and the marina.

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by Hlop on Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:09 pm
Hi Steve,
I'm a sucker for panoramas, you know, and I like yours. Second one is a bit dark altough
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by graphite on Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:23 pm
I would have to agree, thesecond one is a bit dark for me as well. I like the first one the most. I think the way it is framed is wonderful.
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by moggy on Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:46 pm
Top notch Steve, I like all three.
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by stubbsy on Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:54 pm
Steve
I like all three
And as a taxpayer I would like to thank you for the work you do in your real job as well.
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by birddog114 on Wed Jul 05, 2006 2:00 pm
Steve,
I told you go there and work harder with the funding from all of us, but you didn't
Nice panos and we all missed you on this side of the world.
Hope you'll come home soon.
Have fun!
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by avkomp on Wed Jul 05, 2006 2:02 pm
I guess these are the product of RIMPAC??
like all three shots
although agree that the 2nd is a tad dark
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by Killakoala on Wed Jul 05, 2006 2:41 pm
Yep, RIMPAC starts with a 'big grey fury' in a couple of days time as all the participating nation's warships leave Pearl Harbour to start the exercise proper. There is some pretty impressive hardware on show here. (Nice to see the Japanese in force too)
But to kick off proceedings tonight as it's July 4, a big fireworks spectacular is planned.
To the images, agreed with the second one, it is a bit dark but looks ok on my laptop LCD. 
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by sirhc55 on Wed Jul 05, 2006 2:45 pm
Great pics Steve - reminds me of a Mai Tai (or two) at sunset on the beach 
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by leek on Wed Jul 05, 2006 8:41 pm
Last I heard, you were stationed off East Timor... Suddenly I don't feel so sorry for you... but it's good to see that the Navy has their priorities right... 
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by Colcam on Wed Jul 05, 2006 8:49 pm
Killakoala wrote:Yep, RIMPAC starts with a 'big grey fury' in a couple of days time as all the participating nation's warships leave Pearl Harbour to start the exercise proper. There is some pretty impressive hardware on show here. (Nice to see the Japanese in force too)  But to kick off proceedings tonight as it's July 4, a big fireworks spectacular is planned. To the images, agreed with the second one, it is a bit dark but looks ok on my laptop LCD. 
NIce work there for sure. Keep an eye out for good shots in the military vein as that often issues the challenge to the photographer and is very interesting for the civilian population as well. I look forward to seeing something out of RIMPAC.
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by big pix on Wed Jul 05, 2006 8:49 pm
good pixs......... hope you get a bit of shore leave.......
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