Cemetery Pt 1 (B & W)

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

Cemetery Pt 1 (B & W)

Postby stubbsy on Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:02 pm

A few shots taken at the cemetery at La Perouse. These ones seemed to suit a B & W treatment to me.

Image

Image

Image

Edit: Fixed spelling. Thanks Russell
Last edited by stubbsy on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Postby sheepie on Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:05 pm

that second one is a ripper Peter - love your treatment of it :)

the other two don't pack nearly as much punch as the second, but they make a nice group of pics :)


Looks like you've been standing by for the site to come back online!
*** When getting there is half the fun! ***
User avatar
sheepie
Key Member
 
Posts: 3029
Joined: Sun Aug 08, 2004 11:56 am
Location: Picnic Point, Sydney Australia *** Nikon D200/D70 ***

Postby MATT on Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:08 pm

Well, I love No. 1. there is just something about the figure looking down and the expression ..

yes B&W suits these very well..

MATT
User avatar
MATT
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1748
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 8:24 pm
Location: Biloela, QLD-----nikon--D700-----

Postby stubbsy on Mon Jul 17, 2006 6:47 pm

What - no one likes #3 :shock:

Leon, Matt - thanks for your comments.
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Postby Glen on Mon Jul 17, 2006 6:52 pm

They all seem a bit dead to me :lol: Like Leon 2 impresses me
User avatar
Glen
Moderator
 
Posts: 11819
Joined: Sat Aug 07, 2004 3:14 pm
Location: Sydney - Neutral Bay - Nikon

Postby sirhc55 on Mon Jul 17, 2006 6:55 pm

Just to be grave for a second, in order of preference #2, #3 and #1 - you should visit the cemetary more often Peter :D
Chris
--------------------------------
I started my life with nothing and I’ve still got most of it left
User avatar
sirhc55
Key Member
 
Posts: 12930
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:57 pm
Location: Port Macquarie - Olympus EM-10

Postby Glen on Mon Jul 17, 2006 7:00 pm

sirhc55 wrote: you should visit the cemetary more often Peter :D


He's got one foot in it, his 50th wasn't that long back :wink:
User avatar
Glen
Moderator
 
Posts: 11819
Joined: Sat Aug 07, 2004 3:14 pm
Location: Sydney - Neutral Bay - Nikon

Postby macka on Mon Jul 17, 2006 7:07 pm

Jesus looks like he's about to tuck into a nice hot cupcake in #3. :wink:

Love #2. Though, I'd probably crop a bit off the left to match the closeness of the crop on the other side.
Cheers,

macka
a.k.a. Kris
User avatar
macka
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1092
Joined: Sat Dec 31, 2005 4:18 pm
Location: North Rocks, Sydney

Postby terminaltackle on Mon Jul 17, 2006 7:49 pm

I like all 3, the way you capture them is inspiring to say the least. I always marvel at the workmanship on headstones and the message they tell about the deceased.

What is the oldest grave there?
More fishing, more sport, more photo's Pentax 1stds
User avatar
terminaltackle
Member
 
Posts: 171
Joined: Mon Dec 12, 2005 7:04 pm
Location: Alexandra Hills Qld

Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 18, 2006 5:06 pm

Thank you all for your comments. As I've said elsewhere I think B & W suits this type of image. The hard part is determining what treatment to use.

As to the oldest grave. Not sure, but this is a huge cemetary and has been there for a long while. Sadly I don't know what the name of the cemetary is (I'm guessing someone who lives in Sydney may be able to identify it).
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Postby huynhie on Tue Jul 18, 2006 5:16 pm

stubbsy wrote:
Sadly I don't know what the name of the cemetary is (I'm guessing someone who lives in Sydney may be able to identify it).


It was Botany Cemetary at La Perouse/Matraville. :wink:
User avatar
huynhie
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1476
Joined: Wed Jan 19, 2005 12:11 pm
Location: Sydney

Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jul 18, 2006 5:21 pm

stubbsy wrote:What - no one likes #3 :shock:

Leon, Matt - thanks for your comments.


I actually like #3 the best, but all of these are great Peter,
stop making us all jealous :P
User avatar
Alpha_7
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7259
Joined: Sun Aug 14, 2005 6:19 pm
Location: Mortdale - Sydney - Nikon D700, x-D200, Leica, G9

Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 18, 2006 5:36 pm

Thanks Andrew - Seems there is even older stuff we didn't see. I need a return visit:

http://www.esmp.net.au/files/pioneer_memorial_park.htm

Craig - jealous? Places like cemetaries are pretty inspiring photographically. My two recent cemetary shoots (these at Botany and my Newtown ones) were pretty easy since there is so much subject matter.
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jul 18, 2006 5:39 pm

stubbsy wrote:Craig - jealous? Places like cemetaries are pretty inspiring photographically. My two recent cemetary shoots (these at Botany and my Newtown ones) were pretty easy since there is so much subject matter.


I've been only once with my camera and Katie wasn't comfortable with me being there so has, at this stage banned me from visiting cemeteries for photos, so far I'm respecting her wishes, and I'm jealous of, the D2x, the time and freedom you have to take photos and definitely the end results, jealous but inspired :)
User avatar
Alpha_7
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7259
Joined: Sun Aug 14, 2005 6:19 pm
Location: Mortdale - Sydney - Nikon D700, x-D200, Leica, G9

Postby huynhie on Tue Jul 18, 2006 5:43 pm

The cemetary is in a nice location overlooking Botany bay, but I did notice a few of the tombstones were vandalised.
User avatar
huynhie
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1476
Joined: Wed Jan 19, 2005 12:11 pm
Location: Sydney

Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:02 pm

I've just downlaoded and printed out the map for a return visit. There is Pioneer memorial Park with headstones from 1893 as well as "A distinctive Gothic complex of above ground vaults and crypts with gardens and shrines". I'll be going back there.

Anyone interested in a visit there the Friday of the AW. I might take the day off work and head down early
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Postby huynhie on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:03 pm

stubbsy wrote:I've just downlaoded and printed out the map for a return visit. There is Pioneer memorial Park with headstones from 1893 as well as "A distinctive Gothic complex of above ground vaults and crypts with gardens and shrines". I'll be going back there.

Anyone interested in a visit there the Friday of the AW. I might take the day off work and head down early


What time?
User avatar
huynhie
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1476
Joined: Wed Jan 19, 2005 12:11 pm
Location: Sydney

Postby macka on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:12 pm

If you've never been I recommend Waverly Cemetery as well; it is absolutely stunning.

Edit: And not too far from La Perouse either.
http://www.waverley.nsw.gov.au/cemetery/map.htm
Cheers,

macka
a.k.a. Kris
User avatar
macka
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1092
Joined: Sat Dec 31, 2005 4:18 pm
Location: North Rocks, Sydney

Postby thaddeus on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:22 pm

macka, thanks for putting me out of my misery for correctly spelling
Cemetery
User avatar
thaddeus
Member
 
Posts: 418
Joined: Fri Jan 28, 2005 10:04 pm
Location: Sydney

Postby macka on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:26 pm

thaddeus wrote:macka, thanks for putting me out of my misery for correctly spelling
Cemetery


I'm afraid I only recently learnt this as well. I always thought it was cemetary, but no. :oops:
Cheers,

macka
a.k.a. Kris
User avatar
macka
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1092
Joined: Sat Dec 31, 2005 4:18 pm
Location: North Rocks, Sydney

Postby huynhie on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:27 pm

thaddeus wrote:macka, thanks for putting me out of my misery for correctly spelling
Cemetery


Oops :lol: :oops:
User avatar
huynhie
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1476
Joined: Wed Jan 19, 2005 12:11 pm
Location: Sydney

Postby huynhie on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:30 pm

Can I place my error on the fact that english is my second language? :D
User avatar
huynhie
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1476
Joined: Wed Jan 19, 2005 12:11 pm
Location: Sydney

Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:55 pm

Can I ascribe my misspelling to the fact I thought it was spelt that way :oops:

Thanks Russell

I'm thinking a cemetery visit after lunch say 1pm on 4/8. Remembering there is an AW dinner that night.
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Postby marcotrov on Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:58 pm

Peter lovely solemn images with a composition and treatment that further accentuate the feeling. peter I like #3 the contrast and subtle side lighting, particularly on the face really enhances this image. You have indeed 'buried' yourself in this theme :)
cheers
marco
marcotrov
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2577
Joined: Mon Feb 28, 2005 2:21 pm
Location: Cairns, Queensland, Australia

Postby Alex on Tue Jul 18, 2006 7:50 pm

Peter, the 2nd one is great! B&W works really well.

Alex
User avatar
Alex
Senior Member
 
Posts: 3465
Joined: Thu Feb 24, 2005 6:14 pm
Location: Melbourne - Nikon

Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 18, 2006 8:03 pm

Here was my second choice PP on #1. It gives a different vibe to the image IMHO that isn't as strong as the other, darker, version.

Image
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Postby ozimax on Tue Jul 18, 2006 9:12 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Just to be grave for a second, in order of preference #2, #3 and #1 - you should visit the cemetary more often Peter :D


These jokes should be buried once and for all, and I do agree with Chris on the order, nice work in BW, Max
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques