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Shell of a Building

Postby pharmer on Sun Jul 23, 2006 3:32 pm

A 20 sec exposure on the back of a gutted building (shot through a gap in a wire fence)

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Postby marcotrov on Sun Jul 23, 2006 3:43 pm

Beautiful golden light and strong composition Pharmer. Like the line study and the leading lines created by the shadows on each side wall
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jul 23, 2006 4:24 pm

Barrie

This is an excellent shot. Well framed and lit. And in your trademark orange, no less. At this rate all the orange photo receptors in your camera will be worn out.
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Postby mark on Sun Jul 23, 2006 4:38 pm

Barry,

This is a very appealing photo. I'm still learning about composition and this is the type of image that someone like me can really learn a lot from.
Great photo.

:ot: It kind of reminds me of an investment property a friend of mine owned that had been inhabited by a couple of junkies. They moved in paid bond and two weeks rent, then 14 weeks later after they were evicted this is kinda how it looked. Everything inside it including the kitchen and bathroom ended up in the skip on the front lawn.
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Postby pharmer on Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:28 pm

stubbsy wrote:Barrie

This is an excellent shot. Well framed and lit. And in your trademark orange, no less. At this rate all the orange photo receptors in your camera will be worn out.


Can't be helped Peter - I saw the glow of the lights on the walls and had to take a photo, just so happens it was orange :D
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Postby mudder on Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:02 pm

Wow! I really like this... Lots of subtle shadow detail and the glow of the golden light streaming through the windows casting the shadows from the window frames...

This works a treat...!
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Postby sheepie on Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:45 pm

Lovely shot :) Nicely captured - framing is spot on, as is the exposure. Brilliant light!
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Postby Manta on Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:50 pm

Superb image Barrie. Wish I could add something positive that hasn't already been said... :?

Umm..it's orange, it's got lovely leading lines, it's brilliantly lit, it's a great composition..... all been covered. :roll:

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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:24 pm

All of the above :D
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Postby johndec on Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:50 pm

sirhc55 wrote:All of the above :D


:agree: Superb image
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Postby pharmer on Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:13 pm

Thanks for all the comments - much appreciated :D
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Postby owen on Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:41 pm

Yep, I like this one too.
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Postby gunn parker on Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:49 pm

Very nice, great colour, I like this one a lot.
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Postby ABG on Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:35 am

Lovely image Barrie. Well done.
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Postby nito on Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:37 am

excellent :D
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Postby Geoff M on Tue Jul 25, 2006 9:24 pm

I reiterate all of the above, great capture.
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