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Insects for Rel

Postby Zeeke on Mon Jul 24, 2006 5:13 pm

Image

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Happy now Rel?

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Postby wendellt on Mon Jul 24, 2006 5:21 pm

skillfull tim

i like the first one compositionally

and the last one since it has a bluish background rather than a black one
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Postby avkomp on Mon Jul 24, 2006 5:53 pm

the first works best for me.

best composition and angle on the bee.

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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Jul 24, 2006 5:56 pm

Most certainly #1 but they are all excellent - great work Tim :)
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Postby blacknstormy on Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:02 pm

Beautiful Tim - the first one she even stuck her tongue out for you ;) And if you look between her mid and hind legs - you can just see a piece of spider web that she must have hooked up visiting another flower :) That first shot is absolutely spot on - LOVE IT !!!!

I do like the other shots, but the first has just captured the instant perfectly !! I almost want to think that the bee in the last shot is pissed on nectar, and is drunkenly making her way home - hence the blurr going sideways (honeshttt hofficer, I can fly straight if I really really really ..... ummmmm..... conshentrate ;) )

Thank you for making an old duck happy :)

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Postby moggy on Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:05 pm

Well captured Tim, #1 is brilliant but they're all good. :wink:

8) Bob.

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Postby Zeeke on Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:17 pm

Thanks folks for the comments folks... glad ya like em..

Rel.. i like your theory on the last shot!!

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Postby nito on Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:23 pm

Tim, excellent shots. What lens if you dont mind me asking,
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Postby Zeeke on Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:26 pm

90mm Tamron Macro.. awesome lens

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Postby mudder on Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:22 pm

Wow, mate... That first one is an absolute stunner! And #3 is another pearler!!!

These are bloody terrific, great detail, sharp as a tack and not commonly seen in macro stuff, composed beautifully... Strewth, that first one really is excellent...

I was toying with the idea of getting a macro lens to "play with bugs" :lol: (was thinking of the Sigma 150mm), how far from the bee do you think you were???
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Postby Willy wombat on Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:49 pm

Love bee shots.

That first one is a keeper! Spot on. Did you use the SB 800? If so how did you difuse the light?

I see a few dust bunnies in the last shot.

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Postby LOZ on Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:50 pm

Mr Zeeke

The first shot is a corker and would bee one of
the best shots that you have posted here .I'm looking forward to many more.

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Postby Manta on Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:52 pm

Great stuff Tim. You make a strong case for me adding a macro to the kit very soon. (Then I only have to learn how to drive it like you...)
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Postby Zeeke on Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:58 pm

G'day folks..

Mudder: I was probably hanging about 15-20cm off most of the shots.. id just set the focus manually, hold off the bee while its feeding and as its taking off, try and grab the shot.. i have got a couple more flying shots i might add them later if Gary doesnt shoot me for adding more then 4 pics

Willy: I used the sb800, i just turned down the flash power 1 stop or 2.. depending on the background

Loz: Thanks old man...

Simon: You dont have a Macro yet ? :shock: :shock: Get one (Rel, convince him to get a macro!)

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Postby blacknstormy on Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:03 pm

Tim - what do you think I've been trying to do for the last year !!!!
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Postby johnd on Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:06 pm

Excellent shots Tim. #1 and #2 do it for me, they're just a bit sharper than #3 and #4. My guess is you've used f16 or smaller aperture going by the amount of the bee in focus, so you must have used flash. I too would be interested in what you did to stop harsh light bouncing straight back.

Andrew, a bit OT but I can vouch that the Sigma 150 is a great macro lens. Only trouble is I need to get mine rechipped to work with AF-ON on the d200, and Hong Kong is a long way away. :cry: I'm sticking with Nikkor glass from now on.

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Postby MATT on Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:07 pm

Tim which macro do you have???

I have sold another lens and am considering one..


Great shots to.

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Postby Manta on Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:17 pm

The Bug Lady wrote:Tim - what do you think I've been trying to do for the last year !!!


Oh oh... now you've done it Tim.... :roll:
I have to go and hide under my desk at work again..
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Postby Zeeke on Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:20 pm

Matt: Tamron 90mm f2.8

John: Sb800 with flash power turned down.. shooting around f22

Simon: RUN!!

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Postby MATT on Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:24 pm

Thanks TIm...


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Postby Manta on Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:26 pm

STOP IT TIM - THEY'RE TOO GOOD!!! What are you doing to me man?!
Oh, the humanity... :cry:
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Postby Finch on Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:32 pm

I'm not going to sound like a broken record but......"Love the first one you posted!" Great behavioural shot and very sharp. You may be onto something here :D

Excellent stuff

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Postby Zeeke on Mon Jul 24, 2006 9:01 pm

Sorry Simon

Thanks Michael

Hows that D200 going?

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Postby Yi-P on Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:21 pm

Wow those are excellent macros!! Simply perfect :D

I love macros but still dont have any dedicated macro lens. Still on my reversing workarounds :oops:
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Postby Oscar on Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:24 pm

Zeeke, I prefer the first and second shots of each post. All are really good shots.
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Postby SteveGriffin on Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:37 pm

Tim,
I really like #1 and #3 is good as well.

I have to be honest and say that #2&#4 don't do it for me. That is probably because I have an inbuilt bias against butt shots :?
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Postby Slider on Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:54 pm

Nice Tim :D First is my pick. Well done.
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Postby Dargan on Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:18 pm

Superb Tim. I have seen the lens and it is now on the list of eventual purchases. (Why would you buy the Nikkor 105 at more than twice the price when you can get results like these?) They are all excellent.
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Postby jethro on Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:22 pm

All these images are very good. It takes a hell of a lot of patience and grit to achieve this standard of work and ill take my hat off to this kind of patience.
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Postby Zeeke on Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:34 pm

Steve: you dont like a bit of Butt??

Jethro, it just took 15mins of boredom.. i promised Rel that id take some pics for her on sunday, but it rained and my backyard looks like a swamp, so i picked up the camera today and grabbed some shots for her

Thanks again for the comments folks.. much appreciated!

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Postby gooseberry on Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:05 am

Nice ones Tim, like that first one. Would be even better if the background was cleaner.
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Postby mic on Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:08 am

Great shots,

This Forum is certainly bringing in some talent.

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Postby bindiblue on Tue Jul 25, 2006 8:56 am

Awesome shots Tim,, I love them all, never tried to shoot a moving insect yet, bit beyond my talents I think , :)

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Postby Zeeke on Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:52 am

Bindi, nothing is beyond your talents, especially these shots.. just takes time to sit patiently while the bee or insect is feeding and anticipate as they are going to take off.. and pressing the shutter button


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