My brother in law (to be)

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My brother in law (to be)

Postby Geoff on Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:44 pm

My brother in law popped around this afternoon and he's always willing to have his photo taken. I hadn't yet used the 50mm 1.4 much on the D200. All taken with the SB800 and LSPJ - here's just a few - opinions and critique welcomed as usual:

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:56 pm

Geoff - go the black and white - they are very good :)
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Postby Paul on Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:56 pm

The 2nd image is my fav, love the shadows playing off his face. :)
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Postby Geoff on Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:58 pm

Thanks guys - Fred just doesn't mind me clicking him and getting him to pose how I like, he sure likes to make funny/weird faces at me but he's useful to have around when I'm feeling a little creative.
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Postby macka on Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:23 pm

Nice work, Geoff. :D

I like the B&W.

The second and third are a little tight, would be nice to see his whole head.
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Postby marcotrov on Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:28 pm

Agreed, the B&W. Especially #2. Lighting is good
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Postby moggy on Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:40 pm

Yeah, #2 is the shot, reminds me of the old Hollywood Tough Guy promo shots. Good work Geoff. :wink:

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Postby Yi-P on Wed Jul 26, 2006 9:08 pm

My vote for #2 as well... Very good one :D
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Postby Matt. K on Wed Jul 26, 2006 10:47 pm

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The 50mm is a litle short for head shots and introduces a little distortion. It's perfect for full length portraits. Suggest you use a longer focal length for a more natural perspective. He's a good subject...and if he buys you beer then he's also a good brother inlaw. :D :D :D
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Postby Glen on Wed Jul 26, 2006 10:49 pm

Nice Geoff, 2 is my favourite, I would throw 1 as I think the pose is unflattering, it looks like he has no neck :wink:
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Postby jethro on Wed Jul 26, 2006 10:51 pm

Geoff no4 is on the money! Its not cooked in the quartertones as much. Maybe ceiling bounce a bit more might have aleviated this. PS burn tool will tone this down as well. All in all if these are not PS'd then a good result
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Postby Geoff on Wed Jul 26, 2006 10:54 pm

Matt. K wrote:Geoff
The 50mm is a litle short for head shots and introduces a little distortion. It's perfect for full length portraits. Suggest you use a longer focal length for a more natural perspective. He's a good subject...and if he buys you beer then he's also a good brother inlaw. :D :D :D


I don't mind about the beer Matt - he doesn't really tire of me taking shots of him :)

As far as the distortion - can you elaborate? I am yet to see any kind of distortion from the 50mm lens - obviously my eyes are not as well trained or as experienced as yours, but I'm interested to see what you mean by this.

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Postby Geoff on Wed Jul 26, 2006 10:59 pm

jethro wrote:Geoff no4 is on the money! Its not cooked in the quartertones as much. Maybe ceiling bounce a bit more might have aleviated this. PS burn tool will tone this down as well. All in all if these are not PS'd then a good result
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Thanx Jethro - I have done a little PP on these, mainly levels adjustment and just a VERY small amount of saturation and USM.
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Jul 27, 2006 7:09 pm

Geoff. You said

"As far as the distortion - can you elaborate? I am yet to see any kind of distortion from the 50mm lens - obviously my eyes are not as well trained or as experienced as yours, but I'm interested to see what you mean by this."

What I am referring to is at that range the focal length has a perspective that makes his nose look a little longer than it is. The rule generally is...at a close working distance...the wider the angle of the lens then the longer the nose looks. If you are doing a portrait of someone with a long shnoz then you should use a long focal length lens and shoot them straight on. This will make the nose look shorter. If someone has a small podgy nose then use a 35mm or 50mm and it will look longer. Does that make sense to you?
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Postby wendellt on Thu Jul 27, 2006 7:24 pm

that second one geoff is the best it conveys more attitude and the lighting compliments it

the bounce flash on the 3rd is more interesting as a suggestion you could of been taken perfectly straight on, brother looking right into the camera, head straight with the same expression, that sort of shot would of suited that expression and brothers face.
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Postby avkomp on Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:15 pm

2nd BW is my choice also and for the reasons already given.

the lines in the background are very busy in the first

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Postby christiand on Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:22 pm

Hi Geoff,

I'd love to have a person (willing model) to practise portrait shots.
I also like your results.
The BW is nice.

Matt, what focal lengh or lens would you suggest instead of the 50mm ?

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Postby avkomp on Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:28 pm

in film days the 105 was well regarded.

with the crop factor 85 or bigger would be the ticket.
I quite like the 105micro also.

remember also the less "in your face" the photog is, the more potential for the model to be more relaxed

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Postby christiand on Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:55 pm

Thanks Steve,

I suppose the 70-200VR should be singing :D :lol:
I actually have noticed a few photographers (digital)
who were carrying a 70-200 f2.8 on wedding assignments.

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Postby avkomp on Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:01 pm

unfortunately I dont got one of those :cry:
but I can imagine it handling the task well.

that lens and a decent wideangle would pretty much cover the required shots at a wedding.

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Postby Geoff on Fri Jul 28, 2006 12:10 am

The 70-200VR is a MAGIC lens for portraiture and I have used it quite extensively both on weddings and family/individual outdoor portaits :)

Thanx for the comments/suggestions guys!
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