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Small montage from the v8 supercars, oran park...

Postby Kyle on Thu Aug 17, 2006 9:36 am

Hi all :)

I spent some time making this for my brother, who works for caterpillar.

Im not 100% happy with it, only smallish things really..

c&c most welcome/encouraged. How can I improve this?

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/773/18x10ff5.jpg

Many thanks :)
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Postby Raskill on Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:25 pm

I think it looks great. Nice use of selective colour in the main image. The images themselves are nice and sharp, nicely saturated and contrasted also. My only concern in the small image in the bottom right corner, do you have one without the bright relfection off the side of the car?

Are Cat using this for a poster?
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Postby firsty on Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:26 pm

looks good
but if you are going to have some of the main photo showing below the inserts you should have some showing to the sides for balance and so the small frames don't touch the sides
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