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Bronze Portraits

Postby wendellt on Sat Aug 26, 2006 3:49 am

some more backstage portraits with my trusty sb800 which has really proven time and time again that it can produce gorgeous light similar to that of a studio strobe.

mostly shot 1/250 f4.5 ISO800 with the 28-70 f2.8

photoshopped, desaturated the skintones a little and tweaked the colour to bronzify them
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Postby Geoff on Sat Aug 26, 2006 9:15 am

Brilliant Wendell - no. 3 is out of this world!!! :)
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Postby Reschsmooth on Sat Aug 26, 2006 9:45 am

Wendell, absolutely fantastic. I agree with Geoff, no 3 is the pick.

Can you provide a bit of info on how you set up the SB800?

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Postby robster on Sat Aug 26, 2006 10:18 am

That's some great finish, i love personally the first and last shot, she's a great model and it's wicked crisp focus :)

Can I ask what setting you have the flash on? Fully auto or manual? Strobe or standard flash etc? I am just learning to use the 580EX and would appreciate any advice you'd have on the flash side of things.

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Postby Killakoala on Sat Aug 26, 2006 10:19 am

This is the sort of work that will get you famous Wendell. Number 3 is the standout but the others are also fantastic in their own right. I enjoy viewing your work.
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Postby antman on Sat Aug 26, 2006 10:53 am

Wonderful shots once again.
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Postby wendellt on Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:07 pm

thanks guys

as explained many times before in my past posts

1 meter away from position of flash can be determined from the flash reflection on the eyes or the direction of the shadow under the nose, learn how to study lighting results on fashion shots and your half way there. Flash is on ttl so whatever manual exp/Apt settings i use on the camera the flash output is somewhat balanced for the exposure(but i hardly trust on camera metering), sometimes its over or under exposed so i take the first ref shot at my usual 1/250 f4.5(kills the background) evaluate image if it's too bright i hold the flash further away, to dark I bring flash closer
nothing too technical i shoot by feel, the best way to get it is experiment i usually take 3 shots to get the results i want, thats all i'm willing to admit now - and that's a lot of giving after the hard work iof working out my technique myself the rest is up to you to nut crack a little and experiment hard work and persistence = great results
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Postby wendellt on Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:13 pm

here is a re-crop of Jessica Soondarum

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the 28-70 at f4.5 is a sharp lens but it should be noted proper exposure achieved by the flash helps alot
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:17 pm

My preferences in order of merit are #2, #1, #4 and #3. Superb APU :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:51 pm

Great job Wendell, once again you're proving you have excellent skill and technique and a beautiful style to your work. It's always a pleasure to see what you bring to the table, thanks again for sharing.
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Postby asaroha on Sat Aug 26, 2006 2:28 pm

Brilliant, just brilliant.

The fact that I'm attracted to #2 the most is scaring me abit....
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Postby marcotrov on Sat Aug 26, 2006 3:00 pm

Wendell your skill level is moving ahead in leaps and bounds. Fantastic work with superb art direction (i guess your own?) and colours glorious. I suppose to be picky, cause everything else is just so superb, I'd say a reangling of the key light to avoid the rather harsh, unflattering nose tip and shadow on the male model. Can't say it enough simply the best. :wink: :)
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Postby Alex on Sat Aug 26, 2006 4:28 pm

Some stunning portraits with beautiful lighting. Why did you have to go to iso 800?

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Superb phographs!

Postby zafra52 on Sat Aug 26, 2006 5:09 pm

Wendell, what can I say that they haven't already told you those who have more experience than me? They are superb photographs and each one is an inspiration. I would not be surprised at all if any is picked as the photo of the week. Well done!
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Postby Oscar on Sat Aug 26, 2006 6:43 pm

Great shots Wendell. I'm with Chris for order of preference. JUst recently got the SB800 - now I only have to work out how to connect it to the camers. :) Cheers, Mick. :)
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Postby wendellt on Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:30 pm

Alex wrote:Some stunning portraits with beautiful lighting. Why did you have to go to iso 800?

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hi alex

ISO 800 captures as much of the little ambient light in the background
example 2 male model you can just see some of the background

example 1 forced to shoot 1/250 because model is waving her head around
fast motion, I wanted to capture it perfectly still inadvertant effect drowns out all ambient light in the background,

Marco all art direction cocnepts poses are mine
it's bakcstage work i work alone, in the studio however i may have a brief from an art director and may have to work with a stylist, but i havn't worked with either who disagree with my art direction, so i'm lucky

thanks everyone for the comments
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Postby radar on Sat Aug 26, 2006 10:04 pm

Great shots Wendell,

love all of them. If I had to pick one, I'd go with #3. It has a French look to it, which I like.

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Postby Big Red on Sun Aug 27, 2006 1:02 pm

#3 for me as well ... simply awesome 8)
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