Through a curtain of beads

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Through a curtain of beads

Postby PiroStitch on Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:12 pm

Which one works best, if any of them work at all?

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Postby wendellt on Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:14 pm

the facial expression on the 3rd is best looks like shes just caught out but the curtain bead effect looks best on the first

nice concept

what event was thios from?
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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:16 pm

Thanks dude.

Lyndel Yeo show. The last show for Fashion week. :) I have a few others to show later on. Basically, bad lighting and had to use direct flash :(
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Postby wendellt on Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:23 pm

PiroStitch wrote:Thanks dude.

Lyndel Yeo show. The last show for Fashion week. :) I have a few others to show later on. Basically, bad lighting and had to use direct flash :(


looks like backstage stuff
the fashion looks great too

i left fashion week early I should of satyed
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Postby Alex on Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:37 pm

Wayne,

No. 1 works for me. See no problem with the lighting. Nice portrait.

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Postby BBJ on Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:39 pm

1 and 3 for me Wayne.
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Postby mic on Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:39 pm

1 Wayne.
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