off camera flash
side lit
i de-saturated this one to accommodate the makeup concept

here is one closer to actual tone


side lit, this one actually shows the garment more hoo-ha model wears Annah Stretton

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nzfw portraits pt1shot these with the 85mm f4, 1/250 ISO800
off camera flash side lit i de-saturated this one to accommodate the makeup concept ![]() here is one closer to actual tone ![]() ![]() side lit, this one actually shows the garment more hoo-ha model wears Annah Stretton ![]() . Last edited by wendellt on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:10 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Nice images, Wendell.
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Ohmygod! That fourth one is imitating that guy I saw on the cover of Chimp!
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thankyou everyone yeah leigh it's a rokkstar pose not too happy about it it's a bit forced would have been better to get some hands on her chest or something anyway you may recognise the 1st girl it's Zoe
Some great shots, I find the last great and disturbing at the same time. My favourite would be the first, and I love the destat treatment IMHO its spot on for the affect you were trying to acheive.
Congrats Wendell you keep going from strength to strength.
Hey Wendell - I really like #2 - excellent eye contact with one eye in shadow and one eye in the light.
IMO #3 suffers from the eye position - is she about to blink, or does she have right eye that turns down? #4 is fantastic - great series!
Craig - I'm interested in why you find the last image disturbing?
Great work again Mr Wendell! Geoff
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I like all of them but I think the first one is desaturated too much and the colour is too cool.
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Wendell, I'll volunteer to put my hands on her chest for your next image. Always willing to go the extra mile for fellow DSLR forum members. Andrew
Mainly as I was expecting some form or shape or texture in the revealed skin, and it kind appears like a genderless mankin (a gorgeous one mind you) but clothes on.
Love all 4 of the photos, would like to see either of the first two models in the last pose. I feel that the orange of the hair in the last shot is too unbalancing (is that even a word?) against the soft greys and skin tones (the red fingernails work because they don't take up as much area. Just my thoughts any way. Congrats on the great shots!
hi Yi-P I usually shoot at ISO 800 when using my flash to get as much ambient light in the shot if i shot at ISO 100 the flash drowns out the background makes it kind of black in some of these shots the model is well exposed and there is enough background to be seen the ttl mode on the flash automatically compensates for hi ISO the only disadvantage is in the shadow tones you can see noise but its a small trade off to get the tone i want in the image and thanks to everyone else
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