nzfw portraits pt1

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nzfw portraits pt1

Postby wendellt on Wed Oct 04, 2006 5:49 am

shot these with the 85mm f4, 1/250 ISO800
off camera flash

side lit
i de-saturated this one to accommodate the makeup concept
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here is one closer to actual tone
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side lit, this one actually shows the garment more hoo-ha model wears Annah Stretton
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Postby the foto fanatic on Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:00 am

Nice images, Wendell.
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Postby big pix on Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:13 am

Wendell...... your work is improving with every post.......
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Postby Alex on Wed Oct 04, 2006 9:20 am

Wendell,

Great work as usual. No.1 is my pick.

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Postby ABG on Wed Oct 04, 2006 10:33 am

Great work Wendell. Number 1 is my pick too. Fantastic lighting
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Postby Nnnnsic on Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:03 am

Ohmygod! That fourth one is imitating that guy I saw on the cover of Chimp!
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Postby iposiniditos on Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:05 am

All photos are great. If i had to choose one, it will be the last for sure.
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Postby wendellt on Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:42 am

Nnnnsic wrote:Ohmygod! That fourth one is imitating that guy I saw on the cover of Chimp!


thankyou everyone
yeah leigh it's a rokkstar pose not too happy about it it's a bit forced would have been better to get some hands on her chest or something

anyway you may recognise the 1st girl it's Zoe
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:44 am

Some great shots, I find the last great and disturbing at the same time. My favourite would be the first, and I love the destat treatment IMHO its spot on for the affect you were trying to acheive.

Congrats Wendell you keep going from strength to strength.
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Postby Mitchell on Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:44 am

Hey Wendell - I really like #2 - excellent eye contact with one eye in shadow and one eye in the light.

IMO #3 suffers from the eye position - is she about to blink, or does she have right eye that turns down?

#4 is fantastic - great series!
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Postby Geoff on Wed Oct 04, 2006 1:21 pm

Craig - I'm interested in why you find the last image disturbing?
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Postby shutterbug on Wed Oct 04, 2006 1:51 pm

Again I love them all....

What I find is you are not afriad to increase the iso in your cam :wink:
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Postby Grev on Wed Oct 04, 2006 1:55 pm

I like all of them but I think the first one is desaturated too much and the colour is too cool.
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Postby ABG on Wed Oct 04, 2006 2:26 pm

wendellt wrote: [yeah leigh it's a rokkstar pose not too happy about it it's a bit forced would have been better to get some hands on her chest or something


Wendell, I'll volunteer to put my hands on her chest for your next image. Always willing to go the extra mile for fellow DSLR forum members.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Oct 04, 2006 3:32 pm

Geoff wrote:Craig - I'm interested in why you find the last image disturbing?
Great work again Mr Wendell!


Mainly as I was expecting some form or shape or texture in the revealed skin, and it kind appears like a genderless mankin (a gorgeous one mind you) but clothes on.
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Postby Yi-P on Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:14 pm

Do you have any specific reason why choosing ISO800 for this shoot?
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Postby bouyant_clown on Fri Oct 06, 2006 11:49 am

Love all 4 of the photos, would like to see either of the first two models in the last pose. I feel that the orange of the hair in the last shot is too unbalancing (is that even a word?) against the soft greys and skin tones (the red fingernails work because they don't take up as much area. Just my thoughts any way. Congrats on the great shots!
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Postby wendellt on Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:13 pm

Yi-P wrote:Do you have any specific reason why choosing ISO800 for this shoot?


hi Yi-P

I usually shoot at ISO 800 when using my flash to get as much ambient light in the shot
if i shot at ISO 100 the flash drowns out the background makes it kind of black
in some of these shots the model is well exposed and there is enough background to be seen

the ttl mode on the flash automatically compensates for hi ISO the only disadvantage is in the shadow tones you can see noise but its a small trade off to get the tone i want in the image

and thanks to everyone else
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