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by ozonejunkie on Wed Nov 15, 2006 8:34 am
G'day All,
A few months ago I attended my Sisters Debutante Ball, and I organized to get some photos of her before she left. This is the first time I have done anything at all like this, what do you think? And how could I make them better next time?
The first two were taken with the 50/1.8, the last one on my 28-105. Lighting was provided by 2x Metz 45CT4's, reflected in umbrellas.
Cheers,
Tristan
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by Glen on Wed Nov 15, 2006 9:03 am
Tristan, I like, I would have probably tried another background colour as well as I feel the first 2 backgrounds are too close to her hair colour. Then again, a PP whiz here will be able to change to any colour in 2 mins.
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by ozonejunkie on Wed Nov 15, 2006 5:51 pm
Glen wrote:Tristan, I like, I would have probably tried another background colour as well as I feel the first 2 backgrounds are too close to her hair colour. Then again, a PP whiz here will be able to change to any colour in 2 mins.
Thanks for that Glen, that had not even occurred to me! The background was the usual $10 double bed sheet.
Any other suggestions?
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Tristan
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by gstark on Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:28 pm
AActually, the similarity of the colours needn't be an issue, if you can point an extra flash head at the background and illuminate it separately.
This would provide a layer of separation between the subject and the background, and it's a very useful technique to keep in mind.
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by Manta on Wed Nov 15, 2006 8:19 pm
Here's a quick and dirty alteration just using the magic wand, new layer and a hue/sat adjustment. Dead easy. Happy to remove this, Tristan, if you prefer.

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by Matt. K on Wed Nov 15, 2006 10:00 pm
Tristan
Nice work! You go to the trouble to set up the shoot and you get rewarded with good shots. I would have liked to have seen the light a little softer or more diffused (same thing). Also a bit more speration of the lights would have aided in more modelling. Keep at it and watch the masterpieces appear!
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