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Oooh Ahh; Published :D

Postby Ronza on Sat Dec 30, 2006 4:31 pm

If people are quick and look between Saddam and George Clooney...
http://www.news.com.au/adelaidenow
http://www.news.com.au/adelaidenow/stor ... 01,00.html

Was out randomly for a weekly meetup with a mate last night. Lightning started coming down and opportunity knocked. Ending up setting the 1D2 up with the 17-40 doing continuous shots for a few hours in the rain - got reeeealy lucky twice.

The first image will run in tommorow's Sunday Mail

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Postby Critter on Sat Dec 30, 2006 4:54 pm

nothing random about those shots - right place, right time, right photographer... Well done, those are some great shots - you deserve to be proud of the coverage they will get!
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Postby Matt. K on Sat Dec 30, 2006 5:31 pm

The top shot is a top shot! Well done!
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Postby adam on Sat Dec 30, 2006 5:34 pm

The first shot! amazing
All of it, including the pink clouds with lightning and foreground, great

Ronza - did you send the picture to them, or are you working for them?

edit: just read the caption that (AdelaideNow readers Nick Andrew and Ronnie Ling took this photograph of last night's storm from the Gazebo at Elder Park. / Sunday Mail (SA)) So, a reader :)
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Postby Big V on Sat Dec 30, 2006 5:40 pm

Ronza, good job!!! Here are two I got from down at the port..
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Postby wendellt on Sat Dec 30, 2006 5:58 pm

hey ronza

great work

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Postby Alex on Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:05 pm

Excellent result and congratulations!

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Postby Ronza on Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:26 pm

adam wrote:edit: just read the caption that (AdelaideNow readers Nick Andrew and Ronnie Ling took this photograph of last night's storm from the Gazebo at Elder Park. / Sunday Mail (SA)) So, a reader :)


Yeah, I don't mind them cropping it but the entire "reader" thing is toooo far :lol: I had the idea of putting it in for the Channel 10 news but another photographer said something about putting them into the Advertiser as well. Ended up dropping into the Waymouth Street office and downloading the images off my camera with one of the staff photographers and the image editor (they use Photoshop 5)

Big V; excellent job on the shots - what was your method of getting them?
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Postby Big V on Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:29 pm

Ronza, used the 30D and 17-85mm lens, shot at the 17mm end 200 ISO, f10, 30 second exposure
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Postby BBJ on Sat Dec 30, 2006 10:17 pm

Ronza, Job well done mate good to see the shots making the paper as these are great shots and such a nice place to get them with the back drop with the Torrens and Uni bridge etc.. well done.
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Postby stubbsy on Sat Dec 30, 2006 11:02 pm

Ronza

I think these are both great captures of the lightning, but I think you've detracted from the power of the lightning by the highly saturated treatment you've given both images. While these are nice colours I've never seen the sky that purple/red or that intense a blue. By contrast the shots later down by Big V have greater impact, not because he's captured the lightning better, but because the eye is more drawn to the white hot flash of light rather than the intense colours in your versions.

Of course that's just my view (and I AM suitably envious that you got great lightning in the image - something I've never managed to achieve) :wink:

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Postby !~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! on Sat Dec 30, 2006 11:17 pm

that is amazing! i have tried 100's of times with my old fuji to get lightening! never happened, tonioght ur storm is headed our way, i will be ready and waiting with the 400D ;)
Those shots really are priceless
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Postby Ronza on Sun Dec 31, 2006 12:05 am

stubbsy wrote:Ronza

I think these are both great captures of the lightning, but I think you've detracted from the power of the lightning by the highly saturated treatment you've given both images. While these are nice colours I've never seen the sky that purple/red or that intense a blue. By contrast the shots later down by Big V have greater impact, not because he's captured the lightning better, but because the eye is more drawn to the white hot flash of light rather than the intense colours in your versions.


Thanks for the feedback Peter - I actually hadn't seen the images on my own (calibrated) screen until this afternoon post-submission. All the editing was done in conjunction with my mate on his PC equipment. Not keen to open the Pandora's box but; both images were sharpened and adjusted for CA around the bolts. The second image went through much less processing than most of my normal images - a slight adjustment in the Auto White Balance to be less of a magenta and a small luminance adjustment in the blues to emphasise the light fall off from the lightning.

The first image was much more involved, my head served as an accidental (and very much unintentional) ND filter on the corner while cleaning the raindrops off the front. My spiky hair had to be cloned out from the top right just above the lightning. An excellent sunset (main drive to actually head down to the Torrens) but poetic use of the Contrast and Vibrance slider may* have been exercised. Ideally, the first image should depict a sunset and a thunderstorm - it was taken at 8.37PM; the sunset was at 8.32PM.

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Postby DANTPR11 on Sun Dec 31, 2006 1:16 am

Amazing shots from both Ronza and Big V, I love the colour in the first city pic, but both of you picked great locations with excellent scenery.
I was going to start a new new post of my own but might aswell join you guys and show a couple I got from up in the hills during the night.

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Postby Ronza on Sun Dec 31, 2006 1:43 am

Blardy hell - that second photo just screams power!
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Postby Oscar on Sun Dec 31, 2006 8:15 am

Great shots Ronza. Well done.

Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby Raskill on Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:24 am

What utterly unbelievable shots!

Great timing, great colours, great saturation, sharpness.....

I could waffle on, but just accept my congratulations!

Well done on getting the shot and getting published! :D
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:41 am

Fantastic efforts by all phots in this thread. Well done to Ronza for getting published. I like the extra saturation in the pics.
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Postby gooseberry on Sun Dec 31, 2006 7:10 pm

Wonderful colours in that first shot Ron and congrats on getting it published.
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Jan 01, 2007 7:13 pm

For sense of power (particularly the starting node in the top right of frame really gives it impact but for visual impact and visual feast I see why the Sunday mail chose the first. Great images both of them Ronza.
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Postby ozimax on Tue Jan 02, 2007 8:07 pm

Strike me pink, we have some serious good lightning images in this thread. Great work Ronza. I didn't know that Adelaide got storms like this!

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Postby Stargazer on Thu Jan 04, 2007 12:31 am

I'll add a few extra shots from the same night. I took these near Nildottie on the Murray River during a stormchase between Blanchetown & Murray Bridge.

What a night! :D

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Postby Stargazer on Thu Jan 04, 2007 12:32 am

... and a couple more :wink:

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Postby Ronza on Thu Jan 04, 2007 3:48 am

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Postby DANTPR11 on Thu Jan 04, 2007 7:40 pm

Stargazer.... :shock: ABSOLUTLEY FANTASTIC shots, I was quite proud of what I had gotten that night until I just saw what you got, unbelievable, great shots
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Postby Big V on Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:26 am

Pual,some big hits in there!!!
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