Gannets in flight

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Gannets in flight

Postby DaveB on Sat Feb 03, 2007 12:59 am

I've put a little gallery of these up at my site. Please have a look.

As a taster here are 3 of the images:
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Dropping in

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This shot was just as the bird was gaining speed after take-off.

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Another landing, this time taken in infrared.

Incidentally, these images were processed through Lightroom 1.0, which also produced the HTML gallery. The B&W IR images have had pre-processing done by IRaw Mono (and some with LightZone).
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Postby lukeo on Sat Feb 03, 2007 5:22 pm

Dont be worried about lack of replies it's not a reflection on your work, i learnt that one, people are just busy. Take me for instance I saw these last night but didnt respond as I was tired.

My opinion great work, crisp, clear, noise free. The second one is a winner composition wise for me, it's just perfect.
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Postby kamran on Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:13 pm

Amazing images, clean and sharp! Well done.

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Postby surenj on Sun Feb 04, 2007 1:25 am

Great shots...2nd one is my favourite... The other two have the out of focus birds which could be distracting somewhat...
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Postby bwhinnen on Sun Feb 04, 2007 8:58 am

2nd and 3rd for me. The second is a great image and I like the third because there are so many other gannets watching this one come in for landing, with the exception of a couple who are just too busy cleaning oh and the one oblivious to it's impending trouncing right in the center where the gannet is about to land atop of it :D
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Postby fozzie on Sun Feb 04, 2007 9:03 am

Dave - inspirational shooting. If I had to pick one of the three, # 1 - Dropping in. Sharp, with fantastic colour and composition: with the Gannet's head looking down for a position to land, and with wings fully extended.

I have also had a look at the gallery :)

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Postby DaveB on Sun Feb 04, 2007 9:37 am

lukeo wrote:The second one is a winner composition wise for me, it's just perfect.

Thanks. One thing that makes this shot even sweeter for me is that I had to apply NO cropping. Sometimes I find myself tweaking the composition slightly (sometimes dramatically, as in #1). This shot was at 210mm on the 100-400mm zoom.

Thanks for checking out the gallery Fozzie: it's your "fault" I have this Sidekick mount which made shooting these a joy!
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Postby DaveB on Sun Feb 04, 2007 9:39 am

bwhinnen wrote:I like the third because there are so many other gannets watching this one come in for landing, with the exception of a couple who are just too busy cleaning oh and the one oblivious to it's impending trouncing right in the center where the gannet is about to land atop of it :D

If you're looking at those details, what did you think of the 3rd image in the gallery?
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Postby Oscar on Sun Feb 04, 2007 9:51 am

Great shots Dave, I love #1 & #2 in the thread. Checked out your gallery and they are all cool pics too.

Well done!

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Postby BBJ on Sun Feb 04, 2007 9:53 am

Dave, i really like these shots all great but #1 does it for as well, just like the bird that way looks really good.
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Postby bwhinnen on Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:15 am

DaveB wrote:
bwhinnen wrote:I like the third because there are so many other gannets watching this one come in for landing, with the exception of a couple who are just too busy cleaning oh and the one oblivious to it's impending trouncing right in the center where the gannet is about to land atop of it :D

If you're looking at those details, what did you think of the 3rd image in the gallery?


Love it! "I'm going to get you!" would be an apt title :)

I also really like the 9th one in you gallery too!
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:37 am

Dave

I looked at these a few times before I've commented. For some reason I keep coming back to the images yet can't quite nail their appeal. I THINK it's the simplicity of the shots. There are other birds for context, but in each of these images the eye is strongly drawn to a single bird. Oddly I really like #3 yet technically I'd say it's the weakest of the three (the bird's wings are fairly blurred towards the tips, there's that large OOF bird at the front etc), yet the B & W treatment (and I guess the IR of which you are a master :wink: ) give this an odd ethereal quality
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