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Craig
Playing with a few SB800's, the use of Paul's brolly, stand and flash adapter...result # 1 - many more to come. Comments, good bad and ugly welcomed:
Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
Pity my eyes are so bloodshot, but you could fix that in post.. um I like the funky shadow from my arm on the wall.. I'm sure not everyone will but I like the affect..
How did the snoot ones come out ?
I'm going with ugly 
I think a little more contrast and shadow, maybe do it in B&W, it just seems to be lacking punch. Nikon D80, MB-D80, Nikon 50mm f/1.8, Nikon 17-55mm f/2.8, SB-800, Sigma 18-200 f/3.5-6.3
Various bits of borrowed/stolen glass/speedlights etc. - zero style or taste. http://harryfisherphotos.smugmug.com
Took me a while to realise that was Craig's arm in the background. For some reason, the perspective gave it a longer focal length look...
I prefer #2 (in the other thread), the composition doesn't look right IMO - needs to be shifted a little left, towards more of Craig's back.
Goeff
It's a good pose but technically it doesn't 'pop'. I too like the background treatment. The shadows around the eyes? Is that an effect you were after? Regards
Matt. K
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