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Texture and Beauty!

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Jun 06, 2007 2:08 am

Thanks for checking these out!

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Postby Oz_Beachside on Wed Jun 06, 2007 2:25 pm

THey are all creative, but I really like the last one. Nice and sharp on the face, very soft lower body, and a nice full viewfinder.

I noticed this set on your myspace, nice set with a stong colored tile.
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Postby Pehpsi on Wed Jun 06, 2007 2:55 pm

Top stuff as usual! I like 3&4 the best.
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Jun 06, 2007 3:30 pm

Thanks guys :)
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Postby zafra52 on Wed Jun 06, 2007 3:39 pm

I like all of them for each is so different. Thank you for sharing with us your images and ideas.
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Postby wendellt on Wed Jun 06, 2007 4:03 pm

the technical side is getting better, well done
Keep it up

i like the last shot great colours and expression i also like the hair shot great movement
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Postby who on Wed Jun 06, 2007 4:49 pm

I like #1 with the jacket, but do find the white object at her hip a distraction. A very 'real' capture as it freezes motion and reality.

#4 is very well done.
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Postby MATT on Wed Jun 06, 2007 5:34 pm

Last one is great... Actually they are all great, but the last seems..special

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Postby Kyle on Wed Jun 06, 2007 8:59 pm

4+3 in that order for me Dan, well done, getting a lot better! :D
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Postby shakey on Wed Jun 06, 2007 10:31 pm

Three for me, four is good but I think spoiled by the hand or whatever that fleshy blown out thing is in the right lower corner. :lol:
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Jun 06, 2007 10:57 pm

Thanks guys, yeah not sure what that white thing is in the first one, well spotted though as i didnt notice it...ohh and thanx Bono!!
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Postby Nnnnsic on Thu Jun 07, 2007 1:50 am

The last one is the only one that appeals to me, but it like most of these suffers from weak composition.

The first one has decent composition, but it's not exactly a special image.

The colours on the images are nice, but I still think that you're smoothing everything to an inch of its life and losing details. Look at the shadows of the legs in the second... there's no middle! There's leg and shadow but nothing in between, and her shoe-covered foot blends into the ground!
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:59 am

Thanks Leigh for the comments :)

Didnt realize it at first but your harsh C & C is actually helping me.

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