Crock in action ...

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Crock in action ...

Postby camrak on Thu Jun 14, 2007 4:48 pm

From last trip to Darwin ...

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Just two more for fun:)

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Peaceful river ...

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KFC lovers ...

Nice creature ;)

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Postby BT*ist on Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:00 pm

SENSATIONAL!!

Where to start.. well the first is awesome, the action is so well frozen. The second is a crisp action shot. The third is unique and nightmarish (but in the best possible way!). The fourth really deserves another look - it's understated but very effective. And the colour in the fifth is outstanding - really highlights the texture of the crocodile's skin.

Must go there sometime....
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:19 pm

#1 is sensational #2, #3 and #5 aren't far behind. #4 doesn't grab me although I understand where you're coming from.

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Postby Laurie on Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:31 pm

3
wow
made me go OH!! !!
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Postby ripas on Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:32 pm

A very good use of a TELEPHOTO lens !!
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Postby dawesy on Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:47 pm

#1 is a cracker in every way. Big fan of #3 as well.

#4 is the only one that doesn't really grab me.
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Postby ATJ on Thu Jun 14, 2007 6:08 pm

Great shots.

My only comment would be to check the white balance. The first 4 seem a little yellow/brown. I realise the river is muddy, but the cast seems to be over everything.
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Postby marcotrov on Thu Jun 14, 2007 7:00 pm

#1 is superb. Love #3 also. The way you have framed and used the sidelighting really enhances the image. The perspective and the shadow image even down to the gaps in the teeth really make it work for me.
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Postby big pix on Thu Jun 14, 2007 7:29 pm

good series........ but I like 3 the best
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Postby antman on Thu Jun 14, 2007 9:50 pm

Great series. That 3rd pic is pretty intimidating.
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Postby crackatoea on Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:17 pm

I really liked all of them but number 3 also made me gasp when I saw it. Almost makes you feel uneasy just to look at it. Great shots
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Postby camrak on Thu Jun 14, 2007 11:46 pm

Thanks guys for comments, I really appreciated yours opinions!


ripas - wrong!
All photos was taken by 18-70mm nikkor, it is hard to name this lens telephoto ;)

dawesy - on photo #4 I only wanted to show natural environment where I took these shots.

ATJ this was natural light and environment ambient light - and trust me there was exactly this color of light everywhere - just natural. I always take photos in RAW files, so I can easy manipulate the WB but here I left natural color cast for this place :)

Anyway - I also love this #3 shot, but this was really risky situation. Between me and this crocodile was maybe 1.2m distance. Probably few second more for better composition will be the last composition in my life.
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Postby Alex on Fri Jun 15, 2007 5:23 pm

Love No.3. Unusual photo of a crock.

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Postby NeoN on Fri Jun 15, 2007 6:12 pm

Excellent close up on the first one camrak.She needs a good Dentist with plenty fluoride :D .Good series over all.
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Postby ChemicalHorizon on Fri Jun 15, 2007 6:49 pm

#3 rocks. Made my sister squeel :p

those teeth are crazyness
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Postby Nigell on Fri Jun 15, 2007 6:50 pm

That 3rd shot is really something else.
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Postby camrak on Fri Jun 15, 2007 10:18 pm

Thanks again for all comments!
Tomorrow I will try put something less scary from Darwin Trip. ChemicalHorizon - this will be more nice for your sister :)
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Postby colin_12 on Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:19 pm

Three is the one for me.
It realy makes you feel like you are on the menu.
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Postby camrak on Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:13 am

colin_12 I really felt like I was on his menu, maybe with a little bit salad but salad was everywhere, meet was only one ;)
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