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Mother and son

Postby Geoff on Tue Jul 03, 2007 11:37 pm

One from a recent family shoot that I quite liked. Comments welcomed, a tighter crop perhaps?

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Postby Steffen on Wed Jul 04, 2007 6:36 am

Yes, a tighter crop. The expressions on the faces and the hands are very endearing, but the surrounds don't add much, IMHO.

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Postby ATJ on Wed Jul 04, 2007 9:15 am

I agree with Stephen. The background adds nothing to the picture.
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Postby virgal_tracy on Wed Jul 04, 2007 10:50 am

I too agree on the tighter crop.

HAving said that great image and very natural.
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Postby ozimax on Wed Jul 04, 2007 11:24 am

I actually like the background to the subjects, great shot Geoff.
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Postby Reschsmooth on Wed Jul 04, 2007 11:31 am

Geoff, I think the background and foreground add context to what mother and son are doing (looking at something picked up on the beach, presumably) and represents a beautiful shared moment.

I wonder how a colour version would look? (Considering I am a B&W fan) :lol:
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Postby Yi-P on Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:02 pm

IMHO the blown foreground doesn't add too much to the photo, crop tighter :D
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Postby Geoff on Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:04 pm

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Postby Geoff on Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:10 pm

Reschsmooth wrote:I wonder how a colour version would look? (Considering I am a B&W fan) :lol:


Here we are, with a tighter crop too. Personally I much prefer the B&W:
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Postby Yi-P on Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:33 pm

Now that is great looking!! :D
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Postby ATJ on Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:02 pm

I prefer the second image.
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Postby virgal_tracy on Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:45 pm

Love the tighter crop and the colour. I normally prefer B & W but think this second shot is magic.

The background has come to life and there is now highlights within the sand that show up where they didn't in the B & W version.
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Postby macka on Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:01 pm

Geoff, #2 is a winner. Lovely shot. :D

I prefer the colour mainly because this image is already quite contrasty what with the bright sunlight and dark shadows, and the black and white has pushed that a bit too far.

I really like contrasty black and whites as a rule, but for this particular image of mother and son the lowered contrast and the warmth of the colour version are preferable.

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:15 pm

Crop is better Geoff but would have liked to see some fill flash to give even more contrast and bring out more detail :)
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